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How do I write a love poem

When I see a beauty, a vision divine, Love songs within me start to entwine. Her face, a garden of blossoms in bloom, Each petal a verse, dispelling gloom. Her smile, a fragrance, jasmine sweet, Enveloping senses in a fragrant retreat. Her hair, a river, flowing so free, In waves of grace, an enchanting spree. Her eyes, like butterflies, dancing with light, Captivating gazes, a mesmerizing sight. But if my admiration goes unnoticed, alas, Lonely songs I'll sing, hoping she'll pass. Yet if still she remains in her distant sphere, No desperation, for love draws near. I'll wait for another inspiration to flow, For in the river of time, love will grow.

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Date: 4/22/2024 5:56:00 AM
Belated Congrats Jay on your POTD for your wonderful poem of love! Debx
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Date: 3/28/2024 11:37:00 PM
A love poem always comes from the heart. Well done on Poem of the Day, Jay. Blessings this Easter.
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Date: 3/28/2024 7:21:00 PM
' a garden of blossoms, each petal a verse. ' This is so beautiful and romantic. Poetic whispers is a beautiful way to express emotions within. * The soft touch of love * Your thoughts leave me in awe. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:11:00 PM
Many congratulations Jay with POTD. This is such a beautiful love poem. Such exquisite lines, ‘ Her face, a garden of blossoms in bloom ‘ ‘ Her eyes like butterflies, dancing with light’- love those lines especially. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Date: 3/28/2024 11:23:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Jay. A beautiful poem on love and longing. Well done!
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Date: 3/28/2024 10:41:00 AM
Lovely romantic love poetry, Jay. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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Date: 3/28/2024 9:54:00 AM
Objects of infatuous desires may come and go but love's eternal light shall always abide. Congratulations to you Jay on POTD! Robert
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Date: 3/28/2024 9:31:00 AM
Awww Jay, this poem is a "divine vision", romantic write with great rhythm and rhyme! Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 3/28/2024 9:19:00 AM
Such a wonderful proclamation of pure love. Jay this is truly beautiful. So impressed I read it twice. A well deserved POTD. Congratulations, my friend.
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Date: 3/28/2024 8:32:00 AM
Congratulate on your POTD win. WOW!!! A wonderful love poem. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 3/28/2024 8:06:00 AM
A love poem just like this captures her divine essence and his longing, with rhymes and flow just right. Congratulations on POTD Jay Narain! hugs~Anaya
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Date: 3/28/2024 8:00:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Jay :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d, well deserved :) - hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 7:54:00 AM
Very romantic with great imagery, Jay. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/28/2024 6:45:00 AM
Aw such a tender romantic write! Congratulations on potd!
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Date: 3/28/2024 6:40:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 3/28/2024 4:36:00 AM
Dear Jay, your poem is pure magic! Your imagery creates a wonderful portrait of love's longing and beauty. No wonder it's the Poem of the Day! Your words capture the essence of love's dance with such grace. Keep writing those verses; they are touching. Congratulations! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/28/2024 4:01:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD honor...a lovely romantic poem!
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Date: 3/28/2024 3:46:00 AM
Jay, beautifully romantic, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:55:00 AM
Superbo! Congratulations on POTD, Jay, simply sublime
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Date: 3/26/2024 11:25:00 PM
One of your best yet, Jay. A fave
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Date: 3/26/2024 4:47:00 PM
a truly captivating and eloquently written poem about longing and the patience needed to let the inspiration flow, for in the river of time, love will grow. It most certainly will! Your rhyme scheme flowed unobtrusively. I especially liked: "Her smile, a fragrance, jasmine sweet, Enveloping senses in a fragrant retreat." Beautiful words, Jay. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/26/2024 9:45:00 AM
Beautifully penned!! There's longing echoing in the lines.
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