His Refuge

Beset by bitter guilt, he treads the street. From cheerless eyes spring teardrops he can’t quell. His head is lowered should by chance he meet a glance from one who knows his guise too well. He can’t escape his ever-present shame. It’s risen in him, like the moon this night, and so he pumps his arms and runs. . . aflame with pain. He loathes himself, and that’s his plight. The masses fall behind him now. The beach has summoned him, and in the sky a storm of oscillating wings appears. . .the screech of thousands clears his mind. Grey bodies swarm around him. He is found! His spirit lulls. His refuge is the city of the gulls. December 27, 2015 For the Deep and Dark Poetry Contest of Broken Wings
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A   Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:10 PM
WELL DONE.... AWESOME WIN.....LINDA
Selfa Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
A  Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:47 AM
This sounds like Twilight Zone material.. very well done, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement.
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Andrea, a7 and a congratulations on your win!
Tor Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Imagery was exceptional Andrea congratulations on your win!
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Congratulations Andrea
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:56 PM
I fell chilled at the imagery Andrea congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Walker Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Darkness with this wonderful descriptive sonnet.
Inman Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 6:44 AM
Incredible imagery Andrea, left me wanting more. So many unanswered questions.
George   Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:07 AM
Wow!!!! What an image you create here with this sonnet, Andrea. I am dropping in to wish you all the best in the New Year. Keep that creative genius of yours flowing. Your friend in poetry. Elaine
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..City of the gulls in some cities is the dump..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Manassian Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 4:45 PM
OH....wonder so much about the details that have brought him to this place. That's what good poetry is all about. Good work on enjambment. Still can't get the hang of it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:17 PM
you leave much for me to interpret this somber work, andie... awesome , dreary one!.. huggs
Austin Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:08 PM
Wo! I kin hear them screechin hundreds o' gulls. You have identified hell. Love, daver
Smith Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:53 AM
I like the mystery and one can easily put themselves in his shoes. Well done.
Devnath  Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Beautifully pictured my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always,bl
Roper Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 10:41 AM
Love your poem!
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