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Couple, Kiss, Field, Meadow, Kissing, Holding Hands

Have known many kinds of love and deep grief, love has drifted away a withered leaf; and my sad tears could fill the oceans blue, death has come many times as a life thief. My love buried by an angel statue, his black tombstone is covered with mildew; the deaths just keep coming with no relief, I buried baby with a teddy new. When I lost my mother I was shattered, my heart broken in pieces and tattered; for my mother was my anchor and glue, and life became meaningless words scattered. Each day I wear a mask of joy and glee, so no one will know the sadness of me; too many friends and family adieu, father and grandma also souls set free. So many pet cats I loved gone above, each flew to heaven on wings of a dove; when I think of them I become sad too, the feelings for pets is a special love. ______________________ February 24, 2022 Poetry/Rubaiyat/Heartbroken Forever Copyright Protected, ID 02-1433-460-24 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Some Broken Hearts Never Heal sponsor, Faraz Ajmal, Judged 03/21/2022 First Place

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Date: 3/28/2022 3:03:00 PM
Many congratulations on your top win in my contest. It was a really beautifully written piece.
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Date: 3/29/2022 10:09:00 AM
Faraz, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest, and my wonderful placement and the compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~Constance
Date: 3/22/2022 7:28:00 AM
Big Congrats to win Top Love
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:07:00 AM
Anisha, thank so much for the congrats and compliment ~Constance
Date: 3/21/2022 4:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Constance. Love has drifted away, a withered leaf... so lovely and true. Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:07:00 AM
Ann, thanks so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/1/2022 11:40:00 AM
Hello Constance, may you find comfort in Joys to come.' May you find the blessings of God almighty.' Thank you for your fine entry in My last contest, as always there were many Good poems, on different themes which I Could not place, but I took time to read may Your day be well.)
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:08:00 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and for your contests that stir my imagination ~Constance
Date: 2/28/2022 12:30:00 PM
Touching piece Constance, life has its devastating moments, remember you werent alone experiencing these moments, the Lord was with you and he felt your pain. God bless you and hope you get through knowing Jesus loves you and cares and someday you will be reunited with those you love...
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Date: 2/28/2022 2:33:00 PM
Michael, thank you for the compliment on my poem, my journey has been long and winding but yes, God has always been beside me holding my hand ~Constance
Date: 2/27/2022 3:10:00 AM
"Each day I wear a mask of joy and glee, so no one will know the sadness of me" ... This is applicable to almost everyone of us. How many times our hearts have been broken, especially when dear ones part from our life ! Though time will heal some wounds, some stay with us never healed. A touching write Constance! All the Best in the contest....
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Date: 2/28/2022 8:30:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the visit and compliment on my poem, yes, many people wear a mask to hide their pain, for me time has healed nothing, my pain is until I take my last breathe ~Constance
Date: 2/25/2022 4:24:00 PM
I know this one is so sincere, Dear heart. You have had many losses in your life. A most poignant poem.
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Date: 2/26/2022 7:56:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 2/25/2022 1:03:00 PM
WoW! Constance, This is such a moving and touching write on the contest theme. You covered several areas of loss and heartbreak. The pain from losing a loved one can last a lifetime. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
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Date: 2/25/2022 2:57:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment on my poem and for your compassion ~Constance
Date: 2/24/2022 10:24:00 PM
Constance, this poem has touched me. I too have had losses in my life and I miss them very much. Your poem made me think of them and I thank you for that. I can maintain because I believe I will see them again some day. God bless you and yours.
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Date: 2/25/2022 7:49:00 AM
Timothy, thank you for the comment, I cling to that dream also that I will see all of them again too, thanks for the ultimate compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 2/24/2022 7:14:00 PM
Constance, you are amazing! "Each day I wear a mask of joy and glee, so no one will know the sadness of me;" I understand what "heartbroken" means, what you mean. Love and hugs, Dearest Friend ~ Mala
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Date: 2/25/2022 7:50:00 AM
Mala, thank you so much for the compliment and wonderful comment, love ~Constance
Date: 2/24/2022 3:09:00 PM
I look forward to reading the finished poem. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/24/2022 3:18:00 PM
Hi Connie, yes, I am just starting, not sure I will complete this evening as I am a bit tired, blessings ~Constance

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