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Heartbroken

When the days feel burdened or disheartening, by your side is where my soul longs to be. The one place, I used to be able to go, is into your embrace and listened to your consoling voice. By your side is where my soul longs to be. Watching the shadows of moonlight dance around your face as you used to move close for a kiss. By your side is where my soul longs to be, chasing golden sun rays of a new day. We’d walk along the changing ocean's shoreline collecting sand dollars and listened to the incoming waves, and squawking hungry calls of the seagulls swooping low above our heads with outstretched wings. Imprint still remains as once you held me. A heartbroken silence, I know you will never come back. 2/27/2023 2. Heartbroken Writing Challenge -H Words -' Contest Info Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/2/2023 1:18:00 AM
Eve, emotional and wonderfully penned, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/28/2023 7:14:00 PM
Eve your breaking my heart with this one and that is no easy task ;) beautiful congrats! Warmly A.S.
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Date: 2/28/2023 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Heartbroken" is a lovely write. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 2/28/2023 10:19:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 9:56:00 AM
A beautiful poem about missing someone, Eve. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2023 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve, on your podium win; your poem is so lovely, and I like the way you depicted the striking metaphors.
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Date: 2/28/2023 6:28:00 AM
Sounds a lot like loneliness Eve. Beautifully written. So much heartfelt enotion. One can feel the longing. sorry if you are feeling lonely. You can always email me. Maybe we can share some laughs:)
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Date: 2/28/2023 2:32:00 AM
- A deep miss, Eve ... beautiful and heartbreaking poem - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/28/2023 1:59:00 AM
Great emotions described so well. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:24:00 PM
a lovely place to be, the arms of the loved one, i i love hearings the seagulls in such a place, melancholic ending for sure, thanks for the excellent reading yann
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