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Happiness

Happiness Hope. became ecstasy. One quiet night love sparkled in two hearts beneath the stars. Written for Brian Strand’s Tetractys Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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James Fraser
Date: 10/17/2009 6:02:00 PM
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Lovely Tetractys Dane Ann, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest >> James
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Brandee Augustus
Date: 10/11/2009 9:54:00 AM
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I like that you used 'sparkled' instead of 'sparked'. It makes the line more interesting. Congratulations on your win in Brain's contest!
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Adell Foster
Date: 10/10/2009 9:36:00 PM
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Congrats on your win in Brians Contest Dane Ann .I enjoyed the read, much continued success :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/9/2009 2:15:00 PM
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What a creative love poem. I liked that you opened with hope. Congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest! Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/9/2009 7:40:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Dane Ann. May you have many more. Love,Carol
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Carrie Richards
Date: 10/9/2009 7:30:00 AM
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There is romance in the air!! Congratulations on this beautiful poem and your win!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Robin L. Gass
Date: 10/9/2009 4:59:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win, Dane! This is absolutely beautiful and inspired! Love, Robin
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 10/9/2009 4:07:00 AM
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beautiful, congrats on your win!!
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Raul Moreno
Date: 10/9/2009 2:43:00 AM
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Dane, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
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Elaine George
Date: 10/9/2009 2:36:00 AM
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Congratulations dear Dane Ann. A Tetractys Masterpiece. Love, Lainie
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/9/2009 12:53:00 AM
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Congrats on your success in my contest Dane.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.
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Jared Pickett
Date: 10/8/2009 10:41:00 AM
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I have a couple of these... Try the Double Tetractys.... Nice Job.....:JP]
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/8/2009 6:50:00 AM
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Thank you for supporting my contest Dane.Rgds Brian
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/8/2009 6:37:00 AM
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Wishing you the best in Brian's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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