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Happiness

Happiness Hope. became ecstasy. One quiet night love sparkled in two hearts beneath the stars. Written for Brian Strand’s Tetractys Poetry Contest

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James Fraser

Date: 10/17/2009 6:02:00 PM

Lovely Tetractys Dane Ann, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest >> James

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/11/2009 9:54:00 AM

I like that you used 'sparkled' instead of 'sparked'. It makes the line more interesting. Congratulations on your win in Brain's contest!

Adell Foster

Date: 10/10/2009 9:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Brians Contest Dane Ann .I enjoyed the read, much continued success :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Date: 10/9/2009 2:15:00 PM

What a creative love poem. I liked that you opened with hope. Congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest! Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2009 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Dane Ann. May you have many more. Love,Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/9/2009 7:30:00 AM

There is romance in the air!! Congratulations on this beautiful poem and your win!! ~ Love, Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/9/2009 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Dane! This is absolutely beautiful and inspired! Love, Robin

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/9/2009 4:07:00 AM

beautiful, congrats on your win!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/9/2009 2:43:00 AM

Dane, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Elaine George

Date: 10/9/2009 2:36:00 AM

Congratulations dear Dane Ann. A Tetractys Masterpiece. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/9/2009 12:53:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Dane.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:41:00 AM

I have a couple of these... Try the Double Tetractys.... Nice Job.....:JP]

Brian Strand

Date: 10/8/2009 6:50:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Dane.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 6:37:00 AM

Wishing you the best in Brian's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol