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Gym Gym Gym

Gym goer hits the gym—me,
A dumbell slipped wild and free,
He fell on his mouth,
A tooth out, a shrill shout,
Oops! He realised—the gym hit me!



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Victor Buhagiar

July 26, 2025 at 8:08 AM

Quite a humorous limerick. Loved it.

Anne Winter

July 26, 2025 at 8:13 AM

Thank you so much, dear friend :)

Bill Baker

July 23, 2025 at 6:30 PM

Nice Limerick, Anne. Bill

Anne Winter

July 26, 2025 at 7:15 AM

Thank you so much, Bill :)

Sara Kendrick

July 22, 2025 at 1:04 PM

That would be an awful day working out. Maybe a really good reason not to go anymore. LOL..Sara K

Anne Winter

July 26, 2025 at 7:15 AM

Hmm, interesting suggetion :)

I Am Anaya

July 19, 2025 at 8:35 AM

Lol, I love the punch line! Good job, Anne

Anne Winter

July 20, 2025 at 5:27 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Anaya

sara Etgen-Baker

July 17, 2025 at 5:32 PM

entertaining and fun to read. The gym where I work out can be a definite danger zone. :-)

Anne Winter

July 18, 2025 at 7:27 AM

Thank you so much :)

Yann Rolland

July 17, 2025 at 5:25 PM

so cute and well written, enjoyed

Anne Winter

July 18, 2025 at 7:27 AM

Thank you so much :)

Paige Hind

July 15, 2025 at 1:40 PM

LOl funny!

Anne Winter

July 18, 2025 at 7:27 AM

Thank you :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 15, 2025 at 9:59 AM

Dearest Anne, Your Limerick is comedy gold wrapped in gym tragedy! You flip expectations in that last line, a nice twist. It’s got slapstick energy, but there’s something really endearing about it too. “The gym hit me”? That’s going straight on a motivational poster in my imaginary workout room. Thanks for the laugh that even our fiercest reps come with plot twists. Sweating in solidarity, Summer Blessings, My Dearest Anne, Daniel

Anne Winter

July 18, 2025 at 7:25 AM

Dearest Daniel, Thanks for the lovely note! I'm glad the limerick brought a smile to your face. 'The gym hit me' as a motivational poster is genius. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the lim. Warmest regards, Anne

Nkwachukwu Ogbuagu

July 15, 2025 at 7:20 AM

The fourth line of this interesting piece got me thinking with my mouth thrown wide open and ready to shout from entertainment. It's a heart-warming poem. A dancing limerick going down a spiralling staircase. Good work. Please write on.

Anne Winter

July 18, 2025 at 7:26 AM

Thank you so much for writing such a lovely note, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem :)