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Goodnight I Said, As I Tucked My Secrets To Bed

The world slumbers past the rise of the moon And the mist of dark creeps upon Us like a blanket of shadow, Crawling from the farthest horizon As the world falls under the mist Mortal genies crawl out of the cracks in the earth And one by one they eavesdrop on our dreams One by one they hoard our secrets Star-crossed lovers and dusk veiled bandits, And as dawn wills itself to rise The mortal genies take their well kept secrets And scurry into their cracks in the earth Ready to rise in the morning amongst the rest of men, As the mist of dark fades away and recedes to the horizon And the moon stretches back to its eternal bed The sun greets it with a knowing smile And the Moon replies of mortal men: “Alas, if only keeping secrets from Us Were as easy as keeping their secrets from one another” © Samir Georges 2010

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Date: 3/8/2010 10:17:00 PM
VEry original ideas in this one, about the mortal genies. Congrats on your big win, Samir!
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:50:00 AM
Samir, many congratulations on your win in Laura's fine contest >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest Samir. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:56:00 AM
Nice poem with all the secrets hiding at night, there is the unknown to whistle it. Nice imagery and congratulations on winning this contest, Samir. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:17:00 PM
Very very well constructed poem. Winner worthy. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:59:00 PM
Im so glad for you..this poem was certainly deserving of a win. BG
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations Samir, on your success in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! Sponsored by: Laura Mckenzie. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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