Goodnight I Said, As I Tucked My Secrets To Bed

The world slumbers past the rise of the moon
And the mist of dark creeps upon Us like a blanket of shadow,
Crawling from the farthest horizon

As the world falls under the mist
Mortal genies crawl out of the cracks in the earth
And one by one they eavesdrop on our dreams
One by one they hoard our secrets
Star-crossed lovers and dusk veiled bandits,
And as dawn wills itself to rise
The mortal genies take their well kept secrets
And scurry into their cracks in the earth
Ready to rise in the morning amongst the rest of men,

As the mist of dark fades away and recedes to the horizon
And the moon stretches back to its eternal bed
The sun greets it with a knowing smile
And the Moon replies of mortal men:
“Alas, if only keeping secrets from Us 
Were as easy as keeping their secrets from one another”

© Samir Georges
2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 10:17 PM
VEry original ideas in this one, about the mortal genies. Congrats on your big win, Samir!
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March 8, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Samir, many congratulations on your win in Laura's fine contest >> James
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March 8, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest Samir. Love, Carol
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March 8, 2010 at 12:56 AM
Nice poem with all the secrets hiding at night, there is the unknown to whistle it. Nice imagery and congratulations on winning this contest, Samir. (^_^) Noel.
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 9:17 PM
Very very well constructed poem. Winner worthy. Congratulations. Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 7:59 PM
Im so glad for you..this poem was certainly deserving of a win. BG
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March 7, 2010 at 6:47 PM
Congratulations Samir, on your success in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! Sponsored by: Laura Mckenzie. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 7, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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