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Goodbye

Time, like a river, flows over rocks and hills until the moment it finally stills...poet Goodbye is probably the saddest word, no one is ever able to escape. It's as if, when Hello is once uttered, the forming of goodbye is taking shape. Goodbye to "forever friends" we once knew time steals every moment we cannot grasp. so many people seemed to just slip through, how fleeting the moments we did not clasp. Goodbye to children when time comes to leave sunlit days forever etched in our heart. Goodbye to pets we've loved, only to grieve, They kiss our tears as we silently part. So many goodbyes, some we couldn't say. Emptiness remained as we mourned the end. Perhaps we will find them again one day and we'll remind them we once were good friends. February 22, 2023 For "Writing Challenge--G Words" contest by Constance La France howmanysyllables.com=10

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Date: 3/1/2023 11:16:00 PM
Ann, excellent writing, those are some sad goodbyes and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance!
Date: 2/26/2023 7:43:00 PM
Heart touching poem on 'Goodbye' Ann. Congratulations on your great win.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Valsa!
Date: 2/25/2023 10:46:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations...no surprise this top wins the list, Ann :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sunshine!
Date: 2/24/2023 8:26:00 PM
Really lovely poem on Goodbye, Ann, congratulations:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo!
Date: 2/24/2023 7:22:00 PM
A great poem on good-bye with a beautiful ending. Congratulations!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj!
Date: 2/24/2023 4:45:00 PM
oh my, that's such a sweet lovely poem. Congrats for your win.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea!
Date: 2/24/2023 4:21:00 PM
I enjoyed this wonderful write Ann, goodbye can be the saddest word ever heard. Congratulations on your win… Belle
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Belle!
Date: 2/24/2023 3:19:00 PM
Just lovely Ann! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Linda!
Date: 2/24/2023 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful write. Yes, goodbye is a very sad word. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........................
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula!
Date: 2/24/2023 12:51:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your contest podium win, Ann. Your poem is so deserving of such recognition.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lasaad!
Date: 2/23/2023 11:41:00 AM
Yes, goodbyes are always sad especially when our loved one's and pets leave this world for the next. A beautiful heartfelt poem Ann. Good luck in the contest my friend :-)
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Date: 2/23/2023 10:48:00 AM
Ann, you have written a lovely poem. The finale farewell leaves a deep pain and is never easy. Good luck with the contest.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:08:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 2/22/2023 5:39:00 PM
Goodbyes are never easy which you well know, Ann. A semi-sad topic which you have expressed your feelings well. Good luck:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/4/2023 9:08:00 AM
Daniel, Thank you so much!
Date: 2/22/2023 12:05:00 PM
- Goodbye is really a sad word, I agree - A closing word... that says nothing about the future... lovely poem, Ann - Best wishes in the contest (I chose "ghost" :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/22/2023 3:51:00 PM
Ooh-I need to read your ghost poem right now! :) Thanks so much for your comments.
Date: 2/22/2023 12:04:00 PM
So true. There is a finality to goodbye.
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/22/2023 4:30:00 PM
Yes, there really is. We don't know if we'll see them again. Thanks for commenting, Victor!

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