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From the Claws of Death

That night, in a strange place I was like a fly Circling around a street light Reeling…Reeling! I felt so miserable being stranded In a strange place where I knew none Fear wrenched my throat I had heard, In the cover of dark Everyone was a robber Or a masked assassin! Without a roof over my head I was like a mole Smoked out of its hole And exposed to blaring light Had it been my own town Where I knew Every nook and cranny Like the lines of my palm I wouldn’t have minded Being so stranded or left in the night At a distance- Behind the cover, I saw Two figures crouching; Two men hooded and in black They were pointing to me I closed my eyes, Covering them with my palm I knew they were planning to plunder me And spring on me like a pack of wolves In that unearthly hour An eerie fear gripped me Frozen with thoughts of imminent danger Did my heart stop pumping? I saw death face to face All I longed was to slither out of that hole To curl up in the warmth of my home Far… far away! Before I could decide what to do A car came and halted, may be seeing a lady All alone in the night Without a second thought, got in to the car Inside was a family coming back after a pilgrimage. As the car was speeding away, I felt the relief of being saved from the claws of death Placed Tenth April.28. 2022 Near Death Experience Poetry Contest Sponsor- Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 5/1/2022 7:49:00 AM
'Like a fly circling around a streetlight' and 'a mole smoked out of its hole' -- You certainly set the stage for a scary experience, Valsa. Sure glad that car came along! Light and Life, Gershon
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Date: 4/30/2022 3:28:00 PM
What an engaging poem, Valsa. A loving person responding intuitively to a voice within, became the solution to your terrifying problem. God bless them for being available to help others. A great entry for the contest as well. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 4/30/2022 4:19:00 AM
God sent them, they came as your guardian angels and saved you 'From 'the claws of death' Blessings Valsa and hugs, Our dear friend Anil mentions you and Joe Jennifer.
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Date: 4/29/2022 2:38:00 AM
Perfect narrative. I fancied myself in your place. Well done and best for a win. Blessings.
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Date: 4/28/2022 11:38:00 PM
God sent rescue, pilgrims to boot! Very encouraging write, Sis Valsa
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Date: 4/28/2022 4:15:00 PM
This is a really frightening event Valsa, particularly for a lone lady, it is unfortunate that there are criminals out in the world. Using your story, you demonstrate how a fortuitous incident might make the difference between life and death. Wonderfully crafted. Best for a win
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Date: 4/28/2022 11:37:00 AM
When the hair stands up on the nape of your neck, you know someone is looking out for you! Nice write! Aloha!
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:12:00 AM
A terrifying experience Valsa especially for a lone woman, sadly in life there are predators out there. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 4/28/2022 10:00:00 AM
Saved just in time. Some are not so lucky. Your narration describes the difference between life and death a chance event can make. All the best, Valsa.
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