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Wildly winds separate the trees and streams that shelter and nourish our fondest dreams. Casting memories that were deep-seated and expectations never completed. Timely devotion grew like weeds on land soon disappeared like rocks on ocean sand. Never to nourish or take root even to bear the sweetest fruit. Heavens that rumble and burst open wide disclose a vacuum my bosom must hide. Torment that holds on like vise grips cutting jagged chunks till heart rips. Dead senses break emotions once felt like majestic glaciers before the melt. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Second Place Winner ~ A Romantic Longing Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura McKenzie February 12, 2010

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Date: 2/25/2010 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win! I've asked my friends to post comments back. LOL.....Jimmy
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:47:00 AM
The verse portray exactly what you are feeling and what all of us feel at times and so poetically ..the last line itself is most excellent! Congrad's
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Date: 2/15/2010 1:43:00 PM
wow, Caryl, I can see how you placed high. This is a super great sonnet! congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:50:00 PM
Excellent content...heartfelt. Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:42:00 PM
Excellent Caryl and congrats to you !
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:57:00 AM
congratulations on your win with this beautifully passionate sonnetand Thank You for reading mine and leaving your words behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/13/2010 8:36:00 AM
Such a wonderful win in Laura's contest! Congratulations, Caryl! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:57:00 AM
Many congratulations Caryl, on your win in Larua's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in Laura's contest, Caryl! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2010 11:39:00 AM
A sad but lovely sonnet. Good luck. Thank you for your comments on Big Grey. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/15/2010 2:52:00 PM
Great heartfelt poem. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks forn sharing.
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Date: 1/15/2010 10:31:00 AM
Dear Caryl, Robert Frost couldn't have written a better one. Lainie
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:38:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Caryl.'Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 1/13/2010 4:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry todayCaryl . Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2010 2:22:00 AM
Wow! This is an amazing sonnet, Caryl, Reminds me of Robert Frost. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 1/12/2010 6:01:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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