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For My Children

- Daniel Henry Rodgers

Come walk with me on an exploration of the human condition, a journey that digs into the depths of our existence. It raises questions about our place in the world, our connection to nature, and the legacy we leave behind. How we treated people and the message to our children. Who are we but verses in the grand poem of life?

Blessings,
Daniel Henry Rodgers,

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For My Children
- Daniel Henry Rodgers
As dawn's first blush ignites the eastern sky—a cool Caress of dew upon the breeze—and the birds' serenade Pierces the silence, their notes ascending high. The mist, like a spectral ballet, pirouettes, twirling In the light. And the flowers, in their resplendent array, Bloom, banishing the night. My beloved, her face is like a sonnet, and our children are Like verses that are filled with joy. As they stir from slumber's sweet surrender where the day's… Promise to employ. The morning's enchanting beauty – Compelled by the morning's majesty. Leaving behind the Calmness I venture forth. Drawn by its spell, past the graveyard's Solemn serenity—where untold stories softly dwell. Joe and Harry, two elderly caregivers with labored breathing. A simple, empty coffin is being delicately lowered into the cold air. Into the hill of poverty… No mourners are there to offer a tear. No prayers were said for the deceased’s soul. Just a plane grave for a poor man who was so pure And austere, for the man departed this life broken-hearted. "Who’s buried here?" I ask. My voice was scarcely audible over the vast expanse. "Grey Owl," they responded, a hint of contempt in their tones. He was a mysterious man, an enigmatic figure of Native American descent. Who once resided on the outskirts of our town’s edge in a cabin that will soon be torn down All in the name of progress. Driven by curiosity, like a pigeon to its target. I find myself in the desolate cabin. It is worn down and tare. Inside, I am greeted with a testament to the mastery of an artist. A carver's skill— where each piece crafted with love and care. A chair resembling a forest; each leg like a towering tree. The table adorned and etched with rivers—a wooden topiary. An old weathered diary, worn by time reveals the story – Of an old man's tale of love as he poured his heart into.. The land, the forest, the creatures—and society's Betrayal. His words were like a turbulent river rushing through - The landscape of his pain and isolation. A guardian of nature Longing to belong, yet met with relentless rejection. His ancestors, echoes of the past, vanished like smoke In the wind, leaving Grey Owl, the last of his line, To a solitude unkind. The final page, a dedication: "For My Children," it read. And I, a stranger, knelt, wept For him, for the life he led. Back to his grave, I knelt, the diary clutched in my hand, And mourned for Grey Owl, the artist, the austere man—the legacy Of the land. Returning home, I shared his story, his struggles, His art, his life. For my children, and for my beautiful, loving wife, His spirit does thrive. Oh great Grey Owl, the outcast, the loner, now remembered, now revered. Like the morning mist, your spirit lingers, even when it's cleared. His carvings were like artistic poems that speak of life's ebb and flow— A true testament to a life lived, a legacy that continues to grow. "For My Children"

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Date: 6/16/2024 7:56:00 PM
The language of this poem is breath-taking. And so much beauty to share with your children, in spite of some difficulties of life. There's so much depth to this poem.
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Date: 6/17/2024 6:09:00 AM
Hello Mike, thanks for your interest and comments and I appreciate your wonderful feedback. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/31/2024 11:58:00 PM
You do justice to the subjects you pick Daniel. Like the way you concentrated on remembering a life rather than the injustice which becomes self evident to the reader but takes nothing away from the man and his legacy. If anything it makes the legacy that much more amazing. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 6/17/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, David, for your insights and thoughts, which I appreciate a great deal. I wanted to do justice for Grey Owl. He was someone who wanted to fit in, if only he could find that path that society had covered over. Thanks again, my friend, Daniel
Date: 5/30/2024 11:52:00 PM
Good Morning Daniel , this is such a beautiful heart wrenching poem , with such soulful imagery , "His carvings, like silent poems, speak of life's ebb and flow ". So many voices go unheard and so many stories go untold, sometimes only in death we are recognised for who we were, I hope when I look in that mirror I will be remembered for who I was and the lives I touched .Your beautiful poem truly touched me . A definite favourite . Daniel
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Date: 5/31/2024 6:52:00 AM
Good Morning Daniel, Your kind words mean so much. I'm humbled. You're right - too many voices go unheard, stories untold. Your hope to be remembered for who you truly were and lives touched is perhaps our greatest legacy. I'm grateful this poem reflected something meaningful about your journey. Thank you for this heartfelt response. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/28/2024 12:57:00 PM
What an outstanding poem, Daniel. It gently whispers to hearts and souls. Very well penned with humanity. Bravo! The good Lord's blessings to you and your family.:)
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:35:00 AM
Dear Regina, Thank you immensely for your generous praise! Your words warm my heart and encourage me. Your blessings mean a lot to me and my family. With gratitude and Blessings My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/28/2024 6:07:00 AM
Astounding, master work! A metaph, i think, for the Everyman. In our time when it only counts if you are famous, this reminds us via the Gray Owl, that we are all of us distinctly beautiful and meaningful to the universe. Your children…the youth you see are blessed. Thank you
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:09:00 AM
Dear Sally, Thank you for your wonderful feedback. I'm thrilled you saw the metaphor for the Everyman in my poem. Indeed, Grey Owl symbolizes our unique beauty and significance. Your kind words about my children and the poem's impact mean a lot. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/27/2024 5:04:00 AM
Dear Sweet Daniel, This is another richly crafted and well developed penning of yours. It reminded me of Ishi, the native Indian who stumbled into civilization after all his tribe had passed but Ishi did not die alone. He was adopted by an Anthropologist and end up sharing his unique tribal background.
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:08:00 AM
Dear Nancy, Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I'm delighted my poem reminded you of Ishi's story. His journey is indeed poignant and inspiring, much like what I hoped to convey. Your recognition of the depth and craft in my work is truly encouraging. - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/26/2024 3:34:00 AM
This really touched my heart. So many of the lines were absolutely brilliant. The reference to your wife being a sonnet and the children verses was a wonderful analogy. I'm glad that Grey Owl was finally reneged remembered and honoured by the narrator of the poem.
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:07:00 AM
Dear Eileen, Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm thrilled that my poem touched you. Your appreciation of the sonnet analogy and the children's verses means a lot. I'm glad Grey Owl's recognition touched you as well. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/25/2024 6:47:00 PM
This poem is powerful and elegantly composed. It is nice to know Grey Owl will be remembered. Blessings.
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:00:00 AM
Dear Judy, Thank you so much for your kind note, and it is always a pleasure. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/25/2024 6:53:00 AM
The white man's quest for land, power, and to hell with humanity. Now we're moving into space, searching new conquests or maybe positioning for formal ones. Man's destination was always total destruction for themselves. Adam and Eve set the scene, not a lot has changed.
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Date: 5/25/2024 9:37:00 AM
Hello Paul, your insight is powerful and poignant. The relentless quest for land and power seems to be a recurring theme in human history, now extending into space. It's troubling to think how little has changed since the days of Adam and Eve. Your perspective adds depth to the conversation. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/25/2024 1:34:00 AM
Will racism ever be eradicated? People are judged by their dress, their education, their color. The Grey Owl is indeed wise. And I think we are all to blame. Great poetry.
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Date: 5/25/2024 9:22:00 AM
Dear Victor, thank you for your thoughtful reflection. Racism is such a deeply ingrained issue, and it's disheartening how judgments are made based on superficial traits. The wisdom of the Grey Owl speaks to the heart of these matters, reminding us of our shared humanity. Your appreciation of my poetry means a lot. Let's keep hoping for a better future. - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 7:26:00 PM
Wow. I think this is my favorite of your poems I have read so long. The native Americans were so betrayed and they at least honored the animals they killed and used for many items, even down to the buffalo bones. Great message ot grey owl for your children.
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Date: 5/25/2024 9:17:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I loved your wonderful comments. I am thrilled that my poem connected at such an inspirational level with you. The deep respect Native Americans had for nature is something I truly admire and strive to capture. Thank you for recognizing the message I wanted to convey. Your support truly inspires me. - Blessings my friend Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 4:11:00 PM
A mirror reflecting our own lives. The legacy we leave behind. I'm reminded of "The Callous Homeowner" 2/27/2022 a poem I dedicated to a recycler, a couple of years ago. To feel shame, empathy, anything is better than to feel nothing, numb. Grey Owl shows us to feel empathy. Inspiring, Daniel. Have a great Memorial Weekend, my friend!
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:04:00 PM
Dear Anaya, your thoughtful comments on my poem moved me deeply. I'm honored that it connected with you. Your words about empathy and feeling are truly inspiring. Thank you for such meaningful feedback. Wishing you a wonderful Memorial Weekend, my friend. Blessings, Daniel.
Date: 5/24/2024 10:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write/story. This would make a great book... Have a great day/weekend.....................
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:57:00 PM
Dear Paula, thank yo very much my dear friend. Maybe one day a book. Blessings, my friend! - Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 7:27:00 AM
You exposed your heart, poet, and in its showing, I found a peaceful beauty of what should be, sad that the truth is far less beautiful as your kind heart is a rose among thorns...
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:55:00 PM
Hello Frederic, your words touched me. Knowing my poem connected with you means a great deal to me. Your insight and appreciation are like a gentle balm showing the power and beauty of shared vulnerability. Thank you for seeing the rose amidst the thorns. - Blessings, My Friend! Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 4:43:00 AM
Hi Daniel, Your very touching poem is a powerful write and reminder of the importance of empathy. A lesson we all need be aware of - to never judge a book by its cover. Unfortunately, societal norms often lead us to overlook the brilliance and talent of individuals simply because of their ethnicity or outward appearance. Your mention of the caretakers' callousness and judgmental apathy is a stark reflection of our society today. Your write reminded me of another touching story of a blind man begging. A young woman took his sign, which said "I'm blind, pleas help," and wrote something. People started abundantly giving him money. When she passed again, he felt her shoes, recognized her, and asked what she had written. The same thing, she replied, in a different way: "It's a beautiful day, and I can't see it." Such empathy. Every person and their talents are beautiful, but some can't see it either. Hugs Maria
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Date: 5/24/2024 8:16:00 PM
Hi, again Daniel, Thanks for appreciating my comment, but credit goes to you for highlighting the importance of empathy. It's reminiscent of the indigenous people here in Australia, who were only recognized as 'humans' with voting rights in 1968, previously categorized as flora and fauna. Sad but true, and there is so much talent in that 40 thousand-year-old community. If you haven't seen it yet, you may like to check out my latest video collaboration, "Fantastic Beasts." It combines fact, fantasy, and time travel with hidden metaphorical messages to shake us out of our apathy, planetary and otherwise. I'm in awe of how you fit all your writings and comments into your busy schedule. Blessings to you, too! Maria
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:55:00 AM
Dearest Maria, Thank you deeply for your amazing reflection on my poem. Your words strongly highlight the vital importance of empathy in our world. The story you shared beautifully underscores this point, showing how small acts of kindness can make a profound difference. Your empathy shines through your comment, reminding us all to see the beauty in every person. Hugs to you, too. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 3:03:00 AM
- His story deserves to be told for generations...over and over...a deeply sensitive poem, Daniel - hugs
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:53:00 AM
Dearest Anne-Lise, Thank you for your heartfelt comment. Grey Owl's story indeed carries a timeless significance. Your appreciation for the sensitivity in the poem means a lot. Sending hugs right back to you. -Blessings, My Dear, Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 1:11:00 AM
Daniel, you are such a caring beautiful soul, together you and your lovely wife are raising beautiful people. It’s so kind of you paying homage to Grey Owl, may he sleep in heavenly peace… Beryl
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:52:00 AM
Dearest Beryl, Your words always touch my heart deeply. Thank you for your kindness and for recognizing the care we put into raising our children. Grey Owl's story resonates with many, and paying homage to him felt like a small gesture of empathy. May he indeed rest in heavenly peace. Your warmth and empathy shine through your words. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 9:17:00 PM
What a touching story is that of Grey Owl. He lived poor and died poor. But a visit to his cabin showed the talents of that unrecognized man who never captured anyone's attention. He had a feeling heart and he seemed to have had an essential nobility. Your visit alone helped to dig out the great qualities in him. Daniel you are so empathetic and you can easily slip into others' shoes. His diary, the legacy he left behind will open other people's eyes too. The fact that you narrated this story to your wife and children has greatly impressed me. Only a great heart could have gone so deep into the life of an outcast. The opening two stanzas of the poem are so poetic and beautiful. I simply love them. Daniel, you are a blessing!
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:50:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, Your heartfelt reflection on Grey Owl's story and my poems deeply moved me. I'm grateful for your kind words and the empathy you've shown towards his unrecognized talents. Your appreciation for the opening stanzas and recognition of the legacy he left behind means a lot. I wanted to capture the beauty of life in the beginning and then show some of its lost beauty or unacknowledged beauty Thank you for seeing the value in sharing such stories. Your encouragement is truly uplifting. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 8:29:00 PM
What a wonderful gift for your children. You are a blessing to them, as I am sure they are a blessing to you. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:47:00 AM
Dear Richard, Thank you for your heartwarming words. Indeed, my children, grandchildren, and wife are my greatest blessings, and I'm grateful for the opportunity to share this gift with them. Your appreciation means a lot to me. Wishing you all the best. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 7:12:00 PM
Such kind act Daniel. There's so much to life. We ignore most times but it would come knock. Whether it's the good or bad, the fun or tears. Your children are blessed to have you and you shall live on dear friend. I've missed being here. This was a great and emotional piece. In all when we have lived life, may we have people that would miss and remember us. The memories keeps people going in the afterlife.
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:46:00 AM
Dearest Tonye, Your words truly touched me deeply. Thank you for your kind thoughts and for reflecting on the essence of life. Your absence has been felt, and your return is eagerly awaited. Your sentiment about memories keeping us alive in the afterlife is profoundly beautiful. I'm grateful for your support and friendship, and I cherish your presence here. - Welcome Back! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 5:08:00 PM
this is a poignant and well written poem with delightfully flowing alliterative words and lines. Your poem triggered introspection about my life's struggles and the struggles of others and how those struggles shape and redefine us. I identify with the Grey Owl, the outcast. A stunning poem, Daniel! Have a blessed evening, Sara
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:43:00 AM
Dearest Sara, Your heartfelt response truly touched me. I'm grateful that my poem connected with you and sparked introspection. I am sad that you were ever considered an outcast because you have so much to offer the world, especially to those who would listen to your artistry. I am definitely a Fan!! Thank you for your kind words about the alliteration and flow. Your feedback encourages me to always dig deeper into the human experience. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel.
Date: 5/23/2024 2:27:00 PM
Ahhh!! Each person had something to offer the world even though it might not seem like they do. You have done a very good job of expressing this idea within these lines. Thanks for sharing it with us, Daniel, and for stopping by my page taking time to comment. Sara K
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:38:00 AM
Thank You So Much, Dear Sara; I'm glad you found a deeper connection within the message about the value each person holds. It's heartening to know that the poem conveyed that effectively. Thank you for your kind words and for creating a space to share and connect through our poetic works. Your appreciation encourages me always. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 1:21:00 PM
this is beautifully crafted, daniel, and very touching. i expected it to be a poem about your children, yet you very cleverly brought us into grey owl's world and the legacy he left to possibly all the children of the world. a poignant, well-told story...
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:35:00 AM
Dear Ilene, Thank you so much for your amazing kind words. I'm glad you found the poem touching and beautifully crafted. Grey Owl's story is indeed one of universal message, and I'm grateful that you appreciated the shift in perspective. I'm touched by your recognition of the story's poignancy. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 12:14:00 PM
Unbelievable! Are you published Daniel? You need to be... your gift needs to be shared widely. This was perfection. It flows so easily I feel like it was a song I heard, not words I've read. The subject matter is tragic, yet hopeful. Grey owl may have been alone but in order to write this dairy, he had to have hope. I wonder if you'll write some sequels, giving us a peek inside the diary? Such beautiful words and expression. Xo
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:33:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Thank you so much for your incredible feedback! I'm thrilled that my poem reached within you like a song. Your encouragement about publishing means a lot to me. Grey Owl's story indeed balances tragedy and hope, and I'm glad that came through. I appreciate your interest in sequels; diving into the diary sounds beautiful. Your support is truly inspiring my friend. - Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 11:42:00 AM
Dear daniel, this is not just a poignant write that is deeply meaningful but also one that flows with many poetic devices utilised in the most creative manner! But before i get into that i must highlight how this one specific line really stood out for me “ And I, a stranger, knelt, wept For him, for the life he led.” i resonate with that strongly and can imagine you as one who is empathetic and would do just that and feel so much for even strangers. And i must now highlight how catchy wors pairings such as “ Solemn serenity” brilliant oxymoron! And also alliterations that flows seamlessly while you also so storytelling in the most eloquent manner! “ Grey Owl, the outcast, the loner, now remembered, now revered.“ I felt that ao much!! For this outcast loner now remembered. Sometimes, its too late when one is remembered. But thats life isnt it. Your philosophical way of delivering messages through poetry is so very impressive! Fave it is for me! Pleasure reading your work
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Date: 5/24/2024 5:31:00 AM
Dearest Empress, Thank you for your incredibly thoughtful comments on my poem. I'm always deeply touched by your insights and the connection you felt with my lines. Your appreciation for the poetic devices and storytelling means a lot to me. It's heartening to know that the empathy I tried to convey reached deep within you. Your kind words and support truly inspire me, and I am most grateful. The highest honor is reading your comments and knowing it is a FAV. - Blessings, My Dear Friend!! - Daniel
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