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I did a show in this tiny town called Longyearbyen. We went snowmobiling around Svalbard and saw Arctic foxes, snow bunting, polar bear footprints and almost got lost in a blizzard. Bill Bailey Footprint Nonchalantly, the broach of a bear’s footprint. Not any bear…a polar bear; and blizzard… a blizzard to cover one’s tracks. Indeed, lost - bobbing along on a snowmobile venture. The twist and turn of fact and myth dangles at the edge of a bluff. Still, I can see it - a wild fox in a white fur coat, with its bushy tail, and a snow bunting, in flight, with black-tipped wings. A footprint is a funny thing…I am there, transported to a frozen oddity. My eyeballs ogling the path, digging deep, down into the tundra. What more will I discover on the polar beat? Will the bear follow me as I retreat? 2/18/2023 Writing Challenge -F Constance La France

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Date: 4/17/2023 8:25:00 AM
I wouldn't want to come across the tracks of a polar bear. But I can visualize the surroundings, all in artic white. Great verse, Kim Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2023 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 4/10/2023 7:14:00 PM
Oh, now I'm chilly. When living in Vermont, I took my children on little walks 2 find footprints in the snow. Enjoyable times I had forgotten. I would love to see a wild fox w/ a bushy tail in a white fur coat. What a pretty image. Your poem reminds me of a children's book too, titled, Owl Moon. I'm glad 2 have found this one :) It was interesting & pretty.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2023 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so very much! Love that it lit up your memories! Blessings, Marikate!
Date: 4/1/2023 9:02:00 AM
The frozen wilderness has a certain beauty, someplace I'd love to go. If I saw a bears footprints I'd be gone lol. Hope you're keeping well Kim. Just back from my travels. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2023 8:14:00 PM
Gone one way or the other…lol! Thank you, Tom!
Date: 3/28/2023 1:41:00 PM
Lovely writing Kim, very engaging throughout. Reminds me of 7th grade art class when my friend turned in a blank piece of paper entitled "Polar Bear Eating Vanilla Ice Cream in a Blizzard" and got a B- for creativity. Congrats for your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/28/2023 3:04:00 PM
So funny! Thank you, John!
Date: 2/22/2023 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write/great ending. The answer is??? I see you were Not dinner. Hooray!!! Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 1:29:00 PM
LOL…not a ghost of a chance. Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/21/2023 9:58:00 PM
It must have been certainly an adventurous trip ! Spotting the footprints of a polar bear is something unusual. Going to the tundra uplands must have been an exciting experience. Enjoyed your description dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 1:26:00 PM
Some people are made for such adventure! I don’t know how they do it! Thank you!
Date: 2/21/2023 6:15:00 PM
That was a love expedition Kim, and a great poem, winning wishes
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Rose!
Date: 2/21/2023 5:30:00 PM
Very creative, enjoyed. ( as long as no Polar Bears are following me LOL )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:44:00 PM
Watch your back…lol…thanks!
Date: 2/21/2023 11:27:00 AM
Amazing story so well told Kim. So many striking images tell your story! Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! :)
Date: 2/21/2023 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Very Creative. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 2/21/2023 2:30:00 AM
Kim, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done I like the quote also, blessings, Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:20:00 AM
So glad that you enjoyed! :)
Date: 2/20/2023 5:55:00 PM
Exciting tale Kim! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 2/20/2023 4:04:00 PM
You never know what you might find in that frigid, barren wilderness... This poem puts me right in the middle of just such an adventure! Very suspenseful and well written, Kim... My best wishes for the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kelly!
Date: 2/20/2023 12:35:00 AM
Wow, one wild journey here, Kim. Love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:18:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Harry! :)
Date: 2/19/2023 4:11:00 PM
Best wishes on an ingeniously composed Pome Kim! Todat is Darlene D’S birthday. I posted a bog for her special day. Requesting you and other folks here, please find Darlene‘s birthday card today. She’s very supportive of other poets Let’s support her. Panagiota.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:18:00 AM
I agree! Darlene is a sweet poet! Thank you, Pangie!
Date: 2/19/2023 9:33:00 AM
The vivid images of this poem, swept me away to the arctic region, with its thrilling, interesting animals, along with a striking footprint. A wonderful poem, Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:17:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 2/19/2023 6:59:00 AM
This is terrific - free verse is so hard for me - this reads so well.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jeff!
Date: 2/19/2023 1:35:00 AM
Your descriptions are of the highest quality. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, sweet friend!
Date: 2/18/2023 3:36:00 PM
Wonderful poetry that focuses on the footprints in the natural world. Kim, this is a really detailed poem that really brings the imagery to life for the reader. A FAVE!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad, for the fave! I appreciate you!
Date: 2/18/2023 11:40:00 AM
The twist and turn of fact and myth dangles at the edge of a bluff. Still, I can see it -a wild fox in a white fur coat, with its bushy tail, and a snow bunting, in flight, with black-tipped wings...Highly descriptive poem that brings forth the images for the reader, Kim. A FAVE!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:13:00 AM
Thank you for the fave! I appreciate seeing the lines you liked. I appreciate you, my friend Vijay!
Date: 2/18/2023 11:30:00 AM
- Svalbard has a lot to offer when it comes to nature and animals ... But, it's cold and long winters ... a great poem about the footsteps - best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!

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