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For my mother.

Flowers For Mother

I wanted to plant flowers at your grave, and you so loved roses and carnations; now, their beauty dances- sways in a wave, roses stand at your grave as guardians. Charming clusters of carnations enchant, graceful jewel-toned roses so joyful; in the sun like a painting by Rembrandt, not mournful, but peaceful and blissful. Flowers in a place remote and pampered, where chipmunks and squirrels run and birds sing; where teardrops fall on bright roses treasured, and on the gems butterflies wing and cling. Until my time on Earth ends- till that day, then- can the flowers lay in sweet decay. ___________________________ October 9, 2017 Poetry/Sonnet/Flowers For Mother Copyright Protected, ID 17-9482-13-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym Submitted to the contest, Best Sonnet Oct 1- Dec 31, 2017 sponsor, John Hamilton Seventh Place _____________________________ Written for the contest, Roses and Coronations sponsor, Julie Rodeheaver Second Place
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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this fine sonnet, BW.
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Just Heart-wrenching, Constance. I think I commented on this sonnet before, but let me do it again. You touched the very depths of my soul. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Ashley Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:46 PM
I remember well this sad and stirring sonnet, Broken Wings. Congratulations for your wonderful win. ~Susan
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:56 AM
beautiful rhythm sweet Broken Wings, congrats ;)-luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations, Constance on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Congrats Constance on a fine entry and placement!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations Constance for your win with this very moving and beautiful sonnet! : )
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Back again, Constance, to congratulate on another win for this lovely Sonnet. Hugs, Sandra
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Constance - keep up the great writing! :-)
Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Back again to offer you congratulations on your win Broken Wings with your beautifully heart felt write.
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 7:57 AM
A lovely Sonnet from your heart for your dear mother, Constance. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 5:31 AM
Returning with congrats on your top win, BW!
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 5:24 AM
Congrats Broken Wings :)
Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations Broken wings ,,beautiful write and win the 2nd place,,,
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 7:22 PM
Beautiful, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win!
Scars Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 9:53 AM
beautifully sad, lovely as always sweet lady, congrats! :)
Schiavina Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your win, BW.
Hoffman Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Beautiful touching write Constance; i love the verse roses stand at your grave as guardians especially!~Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 9:37 PM
So lovely and moving, Constance! Janice
Ashley Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 9:10 PM
An emotionally expressive write Broken Wings. Poignant imagery in your lovely and loving lines. A beautiful tribute to your Mom. Enjoyed and good luck in the contest!
Parker Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:47 PM
A very sensitive poem of love and a way to say thank you to one so precious to a heart...good luck in the contest
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Lovely poem BW--and an emotional tribute to Mom--apt use of the beautiful flowers--best for a win!
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