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Flipped Hourglass

We flip the hourglass for time, use moments as each hour's pawn. Then store Today, when past its prime, midst Yesterdays--now finished, gone. If we could make one moment stay just by flipping the hourglass, how to choose the hour, the day so many moments come and pass. Or, as time's measure disappears, will we, in greed, pound on the door of hours, minutes, days, and years that come but once and then no more. Time flees--its hours hurry on, a moment's look, and then it's gone. February 2, 2022 for Pick-A-Title Vol. 28 Poetry Contest Flipped Hourglass Honorable Mention by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/16/2022 12:03:00 AM
I'm so glad I took the time to read this Ann. Congratulations on your win in Edward's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/21/2022 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time, Gary. I appreciate your comments :)
Date: 2/13/2022 7:55:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Ann:-) Your sonnet is beautiful and delightful. I loved it!
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Date: 2/14/2022 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Edward. It was an interesting contest.
Date: 2/12/2022 12:59:00 AM
Wow, Ann, fantastic execution throughout. Warming embraces the reader as the eyes are being engaged my friend, Aloha~William!
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/13/2022 9:12:00 AM
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Date: 2/12/2022 3:00:00 PM
Thanks, William for your kind comments :) Aloha!
Date: 2/9/2022 12:47:00 PM
Dearest Anne, and then it's gone!! You are soooo in tune. Love your ideas. thanks dear Anne, suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/9/2022 1:41:00 PM
Thanks, sweet Suzanne. I want time to slow :)
Date: 2/6/2022 5:46:00 AM
Meaningful write Ann---I found the essence of your poem throughout but especially in the great ending lines.
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/7/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thanks for taking time to comment, Vijay. I appreciate it :)
Date: 2/4/2022 7:26:00 PM
This is sublime, each word perfectly placed, those moments do come but once, and then are gone too swiftly - luckily, poems last longer, so will fave this one to enjoy a later day!
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/7/2022 11:40:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle. I seem to be lost in yesterday :) Thank you for faving--I value that!
Date: 2/3/2022 1:46:00 PM
A deeply meaningful, expressive piece, Ann--especially the third stanza! Janice
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/3/2022 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, Janice! I really appreciate your comments :)
Date: 2/2/2022 10:41:00 PM
LOve this, Ann, yes if we could count the gains of sand in a hour glass, maybe one could relive especially the happier times.
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/3/2022 2:58:00 PM
Yes, the happier, but maybe some of the sadder to see if we've learned from them. Thanks, Harry :)
Date: 2/2/2022 9:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem Ann.... ! Yes, every moment is precious. I read this poem as I too have entered the contest, but approached it from a different angle... ! All the Best !
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/3/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa! I look forward to reading your beautiful poem, especially as it's from a different angle. Best of luck to you also!
Date: 2/2/2022 3:40:00 PM
Fantastic sonnet. I chose that theme too just not posted it yet
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/3/2022 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Hourglass is such a lovely word--it brings to my mind paintings of women in long dresses :) I love words we seldom use now. Your poem will be special, I know.
Date: 2/2/2022 2:46:00 PM
I have been thinking about time lately and your work has touched on some of my thoughts. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the supportive visit to my page. Sara
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/3/2022 10:52:00 AM
Hi Sara, it's probably because I think a lot about time, too :) It seems to be going a lot faster and it's sure not because I'm having more fun! I like your poetry, too. Take care :)
Date: 2/2/2022 11:42:00 AM
Hello Ann Peck, I would not know what hour of the day to choose. It would be hard to do. Hugs.
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Date: 2/3/2022 11:31:00 AM
Hello Ann, yes it would be impossible. Hugs. Darlene
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/2/2022 12:53:00 PM
It would be almost impossible, wouldn't it? All I know is, time goes too fast :) Hugs back!
Date: 2/2/2022 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful written Ann! I love the last two lines so creatively spoken. This is a wonderful challenge to embrace each precious measure of time for we can't keep them except in our memory. Best wishes in the contest and blessings!
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Ann Peck
Date: 2/2/2022 1:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam. It seems, to me, that time keeps going faster. I know I can't keep up :) I believe it is Ibeh who is very particular about rhyme endings. With that in mind, I rewrote this at least 6 times! Have a great week--before it's gone :)
Date: 2/2/2022 9:22:00 AM
Nice writing, Ann. Unfortunately, we cannot flip the hourglass. I wonder...it appears the sands would fall the same way as they did before.
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