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Flaws Vs Flawless

It’s amazing what is seen as nice clear skin with a soul stark as ice. Long legs with a crotch and out she will trot at the end of his arm, once or twice. Sweet hearts are all hidden it seems men want only a tart for their dreams. A crooked smile to beguile, a tiny mind infantile and Boozoo’s coming apart at the seams. When kindness is seen as a bore All you’ll find is flaw after flaw Then your just desserts Will come in short skirts While your wife gets the house and much more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:02:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Debbie, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:50:00 PM
I just loved that second one, Deb. with the wife getting the house. Very just desserts. A well deserved win, my dear. Congratulations! Luv, andrea ps I am reading so many I never saw before just going down the list!!
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:30:00 AM
Many congratulations Debbie on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:27:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) D.G.~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,.(s.m.).p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:52:00 PM
Great one Debbie. Bitter but great. congralaions o your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:18:00 PM
A nice triple offering of limericks. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:07:00 PM
Soooooo true!! So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! Congratulations! love Carrie
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:22:00 AM
Hi Deborah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:45:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Deb. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:15:00 AM
I already commented on this Deb, so you know I think it is sensational. Congrat's on your big win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:01:00 AM
So very true. Many congratulations for this top win.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:35:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:27:00 AM
Well done, well done! Congratulations on your winning spot in the contest. This is excellent. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:51:00 PM
DEBBIE~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:44:00 PM
Way to go D.G., I think.. beauty is just a reflection on the outside.. its to easy for silly men.. to fall for them eyes... and as hard as i try to own my house... i always go back to that man who .loves mini skirts.. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 1/22/2011 1:50:00 PM
lol!!!! The best yet, grilfriend. Lainie
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:42:00 PM
you saw a Mom givin' her kid "aspartame soda"...she might as well just told her kid....here, store some poison in yer organs for future disasters that will creep up on ya like a tsunami!!!!
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:35:00 PM
geez-louise...."Lift-Off" and to think it's 5-below ouside right now....who could ask for anything more!!!!(am I feisty? I don't think that's very "Minnesotan" but what the heck!) jimbo
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:59:00 AM
Yes, men are awful, but, you know, there is very little difference between a man and a woman. Hooray for that little difference! Good write, and this form a former lech. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/19/2011 7:29:00 PM
DEb. you are becoming quite the meter maid too (wouldn't that make a cool pen name? May I use it one day? haha) The only line i found a wee bit off was line one. Oh, and typo toward the end: just "desserts" This is a good and funny look at the old geezers who want to trade wifey in for a younger model! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:27:00 PM
Oh wow.....queen of the limerick...you nailed it...and the message here is a hoot!! Ps...soupmail?
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:19:00 PM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:52:00 AM
sweet sarcasm with contemporay display of crisp images, deb lights! who gets the dog??? sumptuous; a winning stuff from your ninmble pen!...:) huggs, nette
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