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First Kiss of Spring

Barbara Gorelick There is nothing quite like a first kiss Tentative and sweet ,quite like spring Emotions first blossoming Sweet pink on cherry trees Soon sun will burn hot And kisses change Remember Your first Kiss For the "Nonet Me A Spring Kiss" contest

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/24/2011 12:08:00 PM

Many congrats : ) Jack

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2011 6:24:00 AM

Wonderful Nonnet Barbara!Congrats on your win---kashinath

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/24/2011 5:43:00 AM

Ah, I still can't remember mine.. Congratulations on your win in the contest BG :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win today in Michael's "Nonet Me A Kiss" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 3/24/2011 2:50:00 AM

Lovely Nonet, Barbara. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/23/2011 8:52:00 PM

Indeed the first kiss is a memory to cherish. Some very warm congrats to to you dear friend.

John Freeman

Date: 3/23/2011 8:05:00 PM

Great to see in the top ten Barbara. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in eighth place. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/23/2011 7:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Michael, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2011 4:31:00 PM

Congrats BG on your excellent win in Michael's contest with this rare beauty First Kiss of Spring entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win with luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 2:58:00 PM

So happy to see you in the winners' circle, dear LNC. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/23/2011 2:02:00 PM

Congrats BG on your win in my contest!!!

George Aul

Date: 3/22/2011 11:00:00 AM

Great write....good luck in the contest.............. George

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/21/2011 6:46:00 AM

Barbara, I sometimes wonder why I can't remember my first kiss lol.. Such a lovely feeling to this write, good luck for MJF's contest :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2011 12:55:00 PM

Great romantic one that reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Each day helps the pains of surgery to get better...Sara

James Fraser

Date: 3/20/2011 9:09:00 AM

Ooo it was so good to read this over and over again. Beautiful entry for Michael's fine contest. Good luck Barbara, and have a lovely Sunday....:)

Karen Croft

Date: 3/20/2011 8:41:00 AM

very nice. good luck in the contest!:-)

Sidney Beck

Date: 3/20/2011 2:17:00 AM

This is very sweet, may I say very feminine...i like it a lot......good luck in the contest..................by the way I'm pleased tha t you like MONTAGE MELTDOWN....to tell the truth i couldnt get a clear and satisfactory story in my head cos the pic was a bit weird, so I just concocted a few amusing headlines together in desperation L O L...Thanks for visiting...best wishes Syd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 10:55:00 PM

oooh, those kisses becoming more hot. That is a NICE line. But for me the "cherry" kiss was the best!! Nothing like those first ones. awesome. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/19/2011 5:59:00 PM

Beautiful to remember a first kiss BG and it is truly magic as is your Nonet.. good luck in Michael's cool contest luv.. elegant blending of Spring and LUV...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2011 5:56:00 PM

Gosh, our poems are so similar, dear LNC. I guess most of them will be about first love. Isn't it fun to think back on times like this. Those hearts were carved in a tree and they are still seen at Holmdel Park in N.J. Peter and I dated two years and then he went off to college... I'm fine. Spent the whole day fishing! Caught some nice whiting. Also got sunburnt. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/19/2011 5:30:00 PM

Very nice Barbara. And true. Thanks for commenting on my work. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/19/2011 5:27:00 PM

very very nice and so true!! Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 4:55:00 PM

Nice remembrance of the past memories aptly recollected in tranquility, Barbara

Daver Austin

Date: 3/19/2011 12:09:00 PM

Ah, the kiss of spring - must be everyone's favorite season. For sure I shall remember this spring as well as my first kiss. Rough winter. Love, daver