First Date - Poet's Dozen Two
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my big brother's friend
asked me out for my first date
he was such a hunk
I was nervous and excited about make up and how to fix my hair!
And what in the world did I have in my closet that was fit to wear?
He was picking me up at six for pizza before the football game.
I knew before the pizza was served, the kind of game he wanted to play.
Yes, Jonathan was handsome, but he was a player...too 'touchy- feely.'
All he wanted to do was get me back in his flashy corvette.
He was all about stealing kisses and groping with octopus hands...Really!
I hate admitting it, but my first date was a fiasco and one that I regret.
It ended with a slap to his face. Between us there was no Kismet.
** Note: My big brother took care of his 'used-to-be friend.' **
December 24th 2015
Poet's Dozen Two Contest
Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2015
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