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Fig Leaf

"We're going to need a bigger fig leaf." Proclaimed the teacher to her staring class As the model removed the last of his attire. A collective, almost silent gasp and the clatter of a fallen brush on parquet floor confirmed this to be true. Among the downcast eyes of most was an accusing glance from pink-faced girl to blushing secret lover. Others scanned the body top to toe; some fixed their gaze; not all upon the model's eyes. The over-fondling of a brush, the squeezing squirting of thick paint from tube A pencil slowly rotated in a mouth; gestures, lost of innocence, in steamy, thickening room. A closeted sigh. A wistful moan. The heavy silence broke; "As you may have guessed," the teacher coughed "The subject for your sketch today is Adam." This or That, Vol 11 Poetry Contest Fig Leaf, placed 3rd Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Date wrote: 31st March 2022

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Date: 4/25/2022 10:33:00 AM
Such wonderful creativity all clothed in whimsy Terry. Have taken life drawing classes and you perfectly describe the reaction of the class. And, of course, love the last line that is full of mischief. Congratulations
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Date: 4/24/2022 2:11:00 PM
A very amusing muse, Terry, my compliments on your win my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 4/24/2022 6:20:00 AM
BIG congrats Terry on your win and for POTD. Loved it all but especially the ending line.
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Date: 4/22/2022 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations, again!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/24/2022 1:30:00 AM
Thank you again.
Date: 4/22/2022 1:46:00 PM
A fantastic, hilarious poem, Terry:-) I can see why this won you POTD! Well-deserved. Congrats ln your win in my contest!
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Date: 4/24/2022 1:30:00 AM
Thank you, for your comments, the placement and for running these contests.
Date: 4/22/2022 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Terry. You wonderfully composed a stunning poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/24/2022 1:30:00 AM
Thank you so much I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 4/7/2022 5:54:00 AM
Verse 5 is a hoot! Congratulations on POTD!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/7/2022 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 4/4/2022 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on POTD. Well done!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/7/2022 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Caren
Date: 4/2/2022 7:28:00 PM
Terry a fun and cute poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Tania
Date: 4/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
You made 'quite an impression' on this canvas, Terry. Wow! Congrats on POTD, Gershon
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 1:52:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon
Date: 4/2/2022 6:48:00 PM
Brilliantly packaged. Congrats Terry Miller
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 1:52:00 AM
Ha ha, thank you for the congrats.
Date: 4/2/2022 5:16:00 PM
Needing a bigger fig leaf, certainly creates an exciting image in my mind. This is cute, clever and so creative. Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush, all at the same time. Congratulations Terry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 1:53:00 AM
Thank you Brandy my best to you also, Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 3:38:00 PM
Congrats Terry!
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:54:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer, have a great day.
Date: 4/2/2022 3:04:00 PM
Very, very clever Terry! Congratulations on your POTD. Brings back memories of my college life drawing classes.
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:54:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, have a creative day, Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 2:04:00 PM
A great poem, Terry! And I was in that life-drawing class (and probably the one who gasped) :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 1:55:00 AM
Haha, thank you for the compliment Ann, have a great day.
Date: 4/2/2022 12:12:00 PM
It was as if I was watching a scene from a film that had been brilliantly directed by yourself. Loved it. So clever. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:56:00 AM
Thank you Gary for your kind words, Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 12:00:00 PM
...I new I should have become a model....but then again at my age they'd just crumple the paper and paint eyes on it......
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:56:00 AM
Me too John, Thank you for the visit.
Date: 4/2/2022 11:09:00 AM
Very funny Terry, congratulations on the POTD. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/3/2022 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, Debra
Date: 4/2/2022 10:38:00 AM
Terry, After the opening line I was hooked ! I loved all the nuance and expressed interpretations of the moment ! So well done . Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 1:57:00 AM
Wow, thank you Susan for your compliment, Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 9:39:00 AM
You have dealt with the subject not in a serious way but in an endearingly humorous manner ! This makes the poem special.... ! The closing line gives the poem an epic dimension with a reference to the Genesis. Congratulations Simon !
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 1:59:00 AM
Thank you Valsa.
Date: 4/2/2022 8:16:00 AM
Appears I pegged this one when I read it the first time, Terry. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. Well-deserved!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:00:00 AM
You did indeed Milton, though I have to say I was surprised. Thank you for the congrats and all your encouragement, Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A creative/fun write. Our art classes were Not like this. Have a blessed day with your win.............
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:01:00 AM
Nor mine, but then I did technical drawing! Thank you for the congrats, Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 7:49:00 AM
Terry, fun poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:01:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, I have to admit I was surprised.
Date: 4/2/2022 7:43:00 AM
A very thought-provoking poem, Terry. Congratulations on the POTD honor. Bill
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:02:00 AM
Thank you, Bill.
Date: 4/2/2022 6:20:00 AM
Very clever ending Terry, Congrats on POTD
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:03:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats Joseph, have a great day, Terry.
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