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Farewell, Painted Birds

 
In Canada we love the red-breasted robin birds, that sing a repertoire of songs with no words. A cheery welcome in each new morns' hush, delight is watching them tug on fat worms lush. But, they are migratory and leave when its cold, gathering in flocks that are beautiful to behold. Before snow to warmer climates they fly away, but not quietly- they chirp and call all the way. Their flock can be twenty, two hundred, or more, some left today up, up into the blue sky they soar. The flock follows no set route but south wander, and I thought where are you going- I wonder. But, in the springtime they will return to me, and groups will be roosting in my backyard tree. __________________ September 23, 2022 Poetry/Couplet/Farewell, Painted Birds Copyright Protected, ID 09-1489-978-23 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Flock of Birds sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 10/06/2022 Fifth Place
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George Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Once again back to your poem with Congratulations, on your win !
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October 9, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the congratulations, Constance
Miller Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:39 PM
Congratulations, very well-deserved.
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October 7, 2022 at 5:23 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, Constance
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October 6, 2022 at 1:00 PM
A cheery welcome…tugging on fat worms… Congratulations!
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October 6, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, Constance
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October 6, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Back with huge congrats on your win Constance! Linda
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October 6, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the congrats, Constance
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September 29, 2022 at 6:05 PM
I love your poem! I love birds. Geese fly to a nature preserve 50 miles from me in Southern NM. I've seen the sky full of them. You are so lucky to have the beautiful birds you write about roost in your tree! Your poem has a happy ending, which I like, altho mine doesn't this time.
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September 30, 2022 at 5:17 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, I love birds also, will miss the robins till them come home, Constance
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September 24, 2022 at 5:35 PM
....photos-write on.....humming birds seem to be leaving early......apparently ontario winter will be early.....stan sand
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September 25, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Stan, thank you so much for the visit and comment, yes, the hummers' seem to be gone also and I agree winter in Canada seems to be coming early, it is very cold at night, the heat is on already, Autumn will be just a whisper, Constance
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September 24, 2022 at 11:22 AM
I love this! You send them off now…but goodbye will be hello soon enough! Hugs, Constance!
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September 25, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, looking forward to my first sightings of robins next spring, hugs Constance
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September 24, 2022 at 5:59 AM
A lofty poem with great imagery Constance. Linda
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September 24, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
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September 24, 2022 at 3:44 AM
I love this poem, it looks like a winner to me Constance, I wish more migratory birds would visit my neighborhood, but, we don't have much water here and of course the birds from Canada would be looking for a lot of water. I love birds <3
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September 24, 2022 at 9:12 AM
BJ, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, we are lucky in Canada that many species of birds find Canada a good warm climate home, I love birds too, Constance
George Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 11:56 PM
Lovely to watch red breasted robins migrating to warmer climes before winter sets in . Beautiful poem, Constance
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September 24, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, to watch them flying away is lovely but also sad, Constance
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