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Expectations of Love

In need of a lover the lady waits; Dressed in sable gown of satin and lace; Dimness of room a wanton mood creates; Expectations of love show on her face. The porcelain lamps with crimson cloth drapes cast ash of roses on ivory walls. Smoke from the absinthe scent candle escapes, filling the air with sweetness as night falls. The mood for love set on this charcoal night; yet still the lady waits there all alone. Her obsidian mind says it’s not right; She has not a lover to call her own. With ruby lips and cerulean eyes, she lays face down on her pillow and cries. October 8, 2017

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Date: 1/5/2018 10:44:00 PM
Awww...John, this is a gem. So eloquently penned and melancholy. A beautiful sonnet, my dear.
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/6/2018 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Rhoda, this was for a very challenging contest. We were given ten words which we had to use i the sonnet.
Date: 12/3/2017 6:40:00 PM
This is tenderly written . Congratulations John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/3/2017 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, I appreciate your kind comments so much. John
Date: 11/18/2017 5:09:00 PM
Ccongrats on your win, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/19/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 11/11/2017 10:38:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic and thoughtful write, John - congratulations on the win! :-)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/12/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/7/2017 12:46:00 PM
I love your take on this theme. Well done! Congratulations on your top-notch win, John. Elaine
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/7/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine, your comments are very much appreciated.
Date: 11/6/2017 7:42:00 PM
John, wonderful flow and imagery ,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 8:02:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much, your comments are appreciated. John
Date: 11/6/2017 4:03:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your placement John:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I was delighted with my placement as well. There were several that placed lower than mine that I thought were better and should have placed higher than me.
Date: 11/6/2017 3:47:00 PM
Hi John, back to congratulate you on your fine placement in this difficult contest! Sandra
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2017 4:04:00 PM
I agree with you Sandra It was very challenging :-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra.
Date: 11/6/2017 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations John on your Win here! This is a very sad sonnet. Well deserved recognition! Best, Judy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. I thought yours was very good as well; a beautiful dream. I enjoyed reading it. John
Date: 11/6/2017 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your 6th Place win! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/6/2017 9:25:00 AM
Dale, thanks for the placement, and thank you for sponsoring the contest; your words made it quite challenging!
Date: 11/2/2017 7:39:00 PM
OH, John, you did a really nice job with those words. Wow, I am impressed. The words have been inspiring some great writing from people. I hope we all get wins!!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/2/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, Andrea. There are so many well written sonnets for this contest, I’m certainly glad I don’t have to judge it. But if I did yours would be one of the tops.
Date: 10/29/2017 7:09:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Terri
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/29/2017 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, Terri!
Date: 10/9/2017 10:38:00 PM
John, what a wonderful Sonnet you have composed with such a sad romantic story using the required difficult words! Best of luck in the contest! Sandra
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/10/2017 4:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra, I appreciate your comments. Best of luck to you as well.
Date: 10/9/2017 1:28:00 PM
- A beautiful poem for contest, John - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/9/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/8/2017 7:19:00 PM
This is my one of my faves so far John absolutely beautiful imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/8/2017 7:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments, Jan, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm not sure how it will do in the contest since it ends with a "lack of romance."
Date: 10/8/2017 5:43:00 PM
I enjoyed this very very much.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/8/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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