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Her evening gown was studded with opalescent sequins. She had chosen the dress herself, deadlier than the male. Why had she brought him there, when doubts could kill? Why did she choose this drowsy reverie, music enhanced? A fairyland of opalescent lights and intoxicating perfumes? A kaleidoscope of prismatic colours that confused the mind. She felt the frenzy of love and lascivious emotions in her heart. Doubts overwhelmed her. Did she dress for him or for herself? Confusion curled into her convulsive mind, an uncontrollable force. He led her out to the uppermost terrace. The moon had risen, But its mild illumination was slightly obscured by softly moving Cirrus of thin, iridescent mist. Time was of essential essence. He drew her to him and looked steadily into her shimmering eyes. Lips met, soft and warm. Her heart beat with extreme elation. She then knew for certain, he belonged to her forever more. 13 February 2023 Writing Challenge - E Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/21/2023 9:53:00 AM
Victor, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, I like the image too, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/19/2023 6:32:00 AM
What an exquisite poem of intoxicating true love, wow Victor this poem is truly incredible. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/16/2023 6:56:00 PM
Just beautiful Victor, so romantic. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/16/2023 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write/story/picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 2/15/2023 3:16:00 PM
An evermore curious mind, reeks of romance's warm and fuzzy sights and sounds, dwelling on each other, sealed with a kiss, ah amore. Congratulations Victor!
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Date: 2/15/2023 10:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 2/15/2023 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations friend Victor! A sweet write. hugs :)
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Date: 2/14/2023 8:15:00 PM
Hi Victor, back to congratulate you on your well deserved great win !
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Date: 2/14/2023 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations Victor. A beautiful poem worthy of your podium position.
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Date: 2/14/2023 12:09:00 PM
Back with congratulation on your win, Victor! This was one that I found to be really enjoyable
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Date: 2/14/2023 9:40:00 AM
Wow, Victor! You should write romance novels :) Kidding aside, your poem is very appealing with lovely words. I especially love "cirrus of thin, iridescent mist." Beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/14/2023 9:01:00 AM
Whoa!! A romantic work for Constance's contest which reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with such a nice review. Sara
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Date: 2/14/2023 2:56:00 AM
A lovely romantic euphoric write, Victor:)
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Date: 2/13/2023 8:25:00 PM
Wonderful write, so romantic.
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Date: 2/13/2023 10:28:00 AM
The perfect one for the Valentine's day to come! Young, innocent, tender love full of emotions elevated by a magical setting!!
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Date: 2/13/2023 9:59:00 AM
This engaging poem has such an otherworldly, romantic and magical aura, Victor. I love the apt title and picture, too. :)
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Date: 2/13/2023 7:17:00 AM
Doubts vanish in an enchanting kiss, Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:56:00 AM
A dreamlike ending-Romantic vibes resonate throughout, Victor. Excellent take on the theme.
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:49:00 AM
Enchanting and celestial setting. In a dreamy mood the lovers get into the terrace and make up their mind to be together for ever. Great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Victor !
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:34:00 AM
You can feel the angst in this write. Interesting choice of words: frenzy of love, lascivious emotions, convulsive mind, an uncontrollable force.
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Date: 2/13/2023 4:54:00 AM
Victor, your exquisite piece has made it easy to imagine the feeling! A terrific entry for the contest!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this morning, it was definitely more stimulating that my cup of coffee!! Happy Monday!
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Date: 2/13/2023 4:36:00 AM
Victor, you have written an exquisitely composed love poetry. Your poetry, Victor, painted such a vivid picture of the passionate moment that it was almost like the readers were already to witness it all in reality. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Date: 2/13/2023 3:57:00 AM
You captured the romantic scene so well in your verse Victor, its as if the reader was there watching it all unfold. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/13/2023 3:12:00 AM
- As if taken out of a film from the 1950s/60s... about love, passion and romantic feelings... a beautiful poem, Victor - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely week :) - hugs
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Date: 2/13/2023 2:37:00 AM
Beautiful love scene... love it. God bless you. love, Gina
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