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Double Etheree Contest

I admit everything even before a word is uttered forever fall on sword as if guilt lives within me I close my eyes & contemplate what life would be like if I rested and just gave myself a bit of a break when I live briefly within a dreamworld I speak freely and dance gaily round discover how to love myself find effortless connection forget the self loathing absorb atmosphere grant my wishes become true seek rest be

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 8:13:00 AM

Seek, rest, be - perfect advice! Congratulations Di11y! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/12/2023 9:09:00 AM

Not a bad motto :) thanks Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 11:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... wonderfully written, D.D. :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/11/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise - I won't rush to try the form again but glad I had a go. I appreciate your supportive words x

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 10:38:00 AM

You’ve expressed yourself very sincerely in the form of etheree, flows well and syllables on point, i love the raw depth of emotions in this! Thank you for writing congratulations

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/11/2023 10:44:00 AM

You're welcome, thanks

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/11/2023 9:03:00 AM

Yours shaped up beautifully! Congratulations on you win!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/11/2023 9:49:00 AM

So kind Anaya - can't say it's a favourite form but I was happy with how it came together. I appreciate your kind words x

Valsa George

Date: 10/3/2023 11:43:00 PM

Perfect Etheree, poignant and powerful. Dear DD, you have to forget the self loathing and live life in love and dreams!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/4/2023 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Valsa, I'll aim to lighten up a bit :) I appreciate your support x

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/30/2023 8:50:00 AM

Beautiful write DD, darkness dispelled by light, sorrow by joy, guilt and low self esteem by freedom and love

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/30/2023 9:02:00 AM

Thank you! I hadn't tried this form before and started a few times but nothing was revealing itself until this one. Thank you for your kind support