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My eyes are not blue, but I see everything through them as if they are. Mum's garden was my favorite place to play. Dad and I chased Cerulean butterflies as they flitted around us through rows of Cobalt delphinium and Royal Blue forget-me-nots. On swift wings, a Sapphire blue jay swept low, singing a sweet mating song before he flew up and away to a Cornflower colored sky. I kept chasing him out of our juicy Indigo blueberry patch. They were for a pie, but the Periwinkle Blue stains around my mouth gave evidence that I had eaten as many as I put in the pail. I remember my parents faces, always smiling at me. When I was five Mum and Dad went away. My world became shaded in Soulful Blues. Grandmother held me and told me I was going to live with her. All I could see through my tears was the Silvered Blue of her hair. I asked if she would take me to Mum's garden to pick flowers. When Mum woke I wanted her to find Royal Blue forget-me-nots. I left Dad a page of Cerulean butterflies that I colored very carefully. I didn't want them to forget me. """"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" 2/27/16 Colour Blue Contest Sponsor: The Silent One

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Date: 3/2/2016 5:23:00 PM
Oh my, this touched my heart. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Excellent, well-written, beautiful, heartfelt.
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Date: 3/2/2016 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Susan...very much appreciated.
Date: 3/1/2016 7:50:00 PM
Lin, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/1/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Luloo.
Date: 3/1/2016 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Lin, and so full of emotion. Great poem!
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Date: 3/1/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you, James.
Date: 3/1/2016 4:31:00 AM
Very heart-felt, Lin. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
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Date: 3/1/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Elaine.
Date: 3/1/2016 1:49:00 AM
Ahhh... Lin! What a poem! Drenched by emotions and as smooth as honey... let me be silent for a few moments to enjoy the great imagery you have created. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/1/2016 3:07:00 AM
Thank you, Bobby. That's quite a compliment.
Date: 2/29/2016 6:19:00 PM
Very heartfelt poem, Lin, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/29/2016 10:33:00 PM
I like my hugs thank you
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/29/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you a whole lot, Eve, and hugs to you ((Eve))
Date: 2/29/2016 5:22:00 PM
This brought me to tears Lin. It is a top winner for me. I was very moved just looking at the photo. It captures the tender heart. I loved your entry needless to say. I also loved how you weaved many different colors of blue into your poem, flawlessly! Congratulations to you Lin! #7
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Date: 2/29/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie. Your commendation is as good as a 1st place for me. I really appreciate your generous words and rating.
Date: 2/29/2016 5:16:00 PM
So beautiful yet so emotionally sad, Lin. Lovely imagery of 'blue' and 'soulful blues.' Congratulation on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/29/2016 7:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I see yours placed as well. I'll visit later to write on your wall...well done.
Date: 2/29/2016 5:02:00 PM
Such a touching poem Lin I had a huge lump in my throat reading this emotional write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 2/29/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. I'm sorry it tugged at your heartstrings.
Date: 2/27/2016 6:02:00 PM
Simply Blue-tiful...great write Lin...^WW^
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Date: 2/27/2016 6:13:00 PM
aww, love your humor, WW. Thank you.
Date: 2/27/2016 12:52:00 PM
Should not have read this - made me tear up. Oh, gosh - you got me, Lin, got me in the best possible emotional reaction the poem deserves. I'll not compete with this, others may write for the contest, but I bow to you and this touching, sensitive piece ... 7 ... CayCay
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:59:00 PM
CayCay, the sentimentality of your comments almost made me tear. You give me the greatest of compliments, but you must enter the contest. You could write exactly what S1 is looking for and mine could be the furthest away. Hugs, to you for your compliments and your rating.
Date: 2/27/2016 8:52:00 AM
Wonderful recollection and coloration. My gram raised me and her garden was full. Found some old awards from the garden club she'd won. I think you helped me walk thru the garden again. DMB
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:57:00 PM
Don't ever stop walking through your gram's garden. The loveliest memories will always be there waiting for you. Thank you so much, DMB, for liking this one.
Date: 2/27/2016 8:27:00 AM
Heart-touching story about childhood, Its beauty and Its pain..Ahh the loss in your poem broke my heart dear.
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Charmaine, for two lovely sentiments and compliments.

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