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Don'T Fight It - Write It

If only I had the will to fight it a sword to smite it an injustice to right it a famous quote to cite it... But of late I teeter and totter bumble and stumble creak, 'cos I'm weak drop the ball or fumble... If only I could take a pill to restore my iron will to bring back the thrill to leap for joy with verve and skill... But we both know there's no such pill not in valley low or high on hill So what to do? I guess I will capture lost glory with a quill No more to fight it!! ~ Just to write it! June 13, 2023 Entry in John Lawless' DON'T FIGHT IT - WRITE IT Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/26/2023 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. You need to do what you do best. Just write about it... Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 6/25/2023 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your wit, wisdom, and winning words through your excellent poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 6/16/2023 8:42:00 AM
Excellent poem B.B….so well written….flows beautifully! Debx
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Date: 6/15/2023 4:52:00 PM
I need that quill sometimes Gershon, is it magic? That wretched tabula rasa, my blank slate. I need to read more of your poems to fill my own slate creatively.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2023 7:31:00 PM
Read all 6,000 of them, Marikate. You may get 1.346 - 2.7341 or so random ideas out of them. lol. Keep smiling. ~ Kayree Tivitee
Date: 6/14/2023 11:17:00 PM
Gershon at least you can pretend when you write, lol. So writing about these emotions they are relived inside, so my guess is you still got it upstairs in the brain, now if it can work its way down. lol
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/15/2023 7:34:00 PM
What I retain 'upstairs' ain't nothing compared to all the junk I got in the cellar! lol. Thanks, Michael
Date: 6/14/2023 5:56:00 PM
This is 'Write On'! Great lead up to the final line.
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Date: 6/14/2023 6:17:00 PM
Thanks for the appreciation on this one, David!
Date: 6/14/2023 1:58:00 PM
The pen is mighty in the diminished body…
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Date: 6/14/2023 6:12:00 PM
Instead of crescendere, it's descendere... 1st floor. Doors Closing. Going Down...
Date: 6/14/2023 10:39:00 AM
There's Zinc, it works with the immune system [strength] -better yet keep on writing it! This is fabulous and best for the win, GW. wow
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Date: 6/14/2023 6:09:00 PM
Gee, thanks! Very encouraging comment --- appreciated. :) gw
Date: 6/14/2023 6:48:00 AM
Teehee gw. I guessed you were a lover, not a fighter. :) laf
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Date: 6/14/2023 6:06:00 PM
Who, me? A lover? Teehee, gw
Date: 6/14/2023 12:33:00 AM
Great writing, Gershon:)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2023 6:00:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment, Joanna. Hope you are well. Light and Joy, Gershon
Date: 6/13/2023 7:41:00 PM
Why should you fight it Or swipe it with a sword? Gershon you know already The pen is mightier than the sword!
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Date: 6/13/2023 8:00:00 PM
Heh - heh. Great reminder, Shirley. Peace, Gershon

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