Derelict

There once was a derelict named Hank
his show was just an outrageous prank
	he took their money
	thinking it funny 
and he laughed all the way to the bank
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Linda, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - D Forms, well done, blessings, Constance
Fowler Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 2:27 PM
Many thanks Constance. These are fun form contests! Thank you for sponsoring! :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
Fowler Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Thank you Sara. :)
George Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Quite Amusing ! There are some such 'derelicts' who earn a lot of money through clever pranks. Congratulations Linda on your win .
Fowler Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 5:25 AM
You words are so true Valsa. Thanks for stopping by with comments and congrats! :)
Baker Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Bad boy that Hank! I thank ... think :-) Good luck in the contest, Linda. Bill
Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Thanks Bill. Good to see you again! :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 3:03 PM
A bewitching scene besets, Linda, as karma laughs last, with my compliments add Aloha, William
Fowler Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 8:00 AM
teehee. Many thanks William! aloha Linda
Volumes Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:38 PM
and not derelict any more? Too cute Linda
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 5:15 PM
I expect he continued on with the ruse, like Sir Conan Doyle's 'The Man with the Twisted Lip'. LOL. Thanks for stopping by Wendy! Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:37 AM
Loved your limerick. Safe place to put it in a bank.
Fowler Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Hi there Victor. Nice to see you. Thanks for the visit and comments. hugs :)
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