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Delilah

Delilah is a temptress with the magic of allure, but special potions or devices aren’t required by her. Women notice (enviously) her flawless skin so fair and the unusual style of her lustrous long sleek hair. She walks into a restaurant, a club, or any place. . . . Silence falls as everybody’s gaze rests on her face. The eyes of men are quickly drawn to a rosebud mouth before they ever let their lustful eyes start traveling south. That perfect mouth is painted pink. She lays one fingertip seductively upon her pouty luscious bottom lip. She wears a look “come hither” with the freshness of a girl, and violets adorn her silky chestnut locks that swirl. But merely entering the room is all she needs to do for everyone to notice her most beautiful tattoo. A rosy blossom at her eye the people see begin to bloom out toward her cheekbone, and then narrow toward her chin. A mark of beauty like no other they have ever seen: this flowery tattoo must be the symbol of a queen! Delilah only looks upon a man; his heart will burn, and then he will do anything, this woman’s love to earn. But the poor unfortunate with whom Delilah leaves will taste forbidden fruit, and afterwards, he grieves. That’s because Delilah cannot be with just one man. This was the condition of another’s vengeful plan. Because she spurned a powerful ancient god above, he ruled that she would come to earth to never taste true love. To keep her beauty, she must feel a mortal man’s desire, but having one man more than once extinguishes the fire. Should she stay with just one man, the tattoo near her eye will fade away and like that flower, withering, she’ll die. So the temptress - never staying in one place - moves on. A night of passion, then her victim wakes to find her gone. Having spent one night with her, his joy stays in the past, and she, that lovely goddess, is denied a love that lasts.
Written by Andrea Dietrich Inspired by the contest: "Tell Her Story" Sponsored by ~ Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/15/2011 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in Tell Her Story! Like the story, well told, Andrea. Reminds me of Tom Jones song of the same name:) Thanks for your comment on Sunday March 6...yes it is fun to write about those miserable days when it's best to stay inside and dry...can vent a bit in those pieces;))
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Date: 3/14/2011 5:44:00 PM
Bravo, bravo!! Congrats on your win. Does Delilah own a pair of scissors? You didn't mention. lol. Favorite description was her rose bud lips...and the angels vengeful plan. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Apparently, this is not the same Delilah who turned Samson in to the Phillistines.
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:41:00 PM
pleased to see you have had a win with this flowing write Andrea.
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Date: 3/12/2011 2:40:00 PM
A beautiful write and such a story it told. I like the poems that tell a story and leaves a lot to the imagination. So Red Riding Hood was worth a movie trip. Will have to watch it as long as it not vampire crap that is out nowadays. love phyl
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Date: 3/12/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this great poem Andrea. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 3/12/2011 6:55:00 AM
Great poem - look forward to reading your anagram poem too. Rich and dear tie LOL
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:15:00 PM
congrats on your 2nd place win, I liked this when I first read it...soupmail returned!
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your Delilah winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" Andrea. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2011 9:04:00 AM
So many Sampson's dutifully furnish her with one-night stands. Great job describing the allure of the femme fatale of lore.
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Date: 3/11/2011 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win and you are right our muses took us down the same road ever so closely,,,enjoyed reading and Thank you for all your visits and for all your words that you have left behind,,,PS,,yes you were right about my magnet poem that is my wife,,her name is Debbie,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/11/2011 6:33:00 AM
This is a great poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your big win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 5:34:00 AM
My Mirabella was not from the country song Andrea but from a true incident ..years ago in Philadelphia there was a restaurant named Mirabella after the owner's daughter.. and the story happened to her on her wedding day ... awful and she was never the same.. such a young and pretty girl..too.. thankxx for asking luv..
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Date: 3/11/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Constance, Andrea
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:05:00 AM
Wonderful story about Delilah Andrea. You sure have taken us a journey with her. Many congratulations on your fine win. And yes, I'm 100% Scottish...:)
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:30:00 PM
a real fave of mine as well... love the twirl at the end, andie girl... rrwwharr, you whooot me.. HIGH 7 CONGRATS to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:54:00 PM
My Fav. Knew it would do well. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/10/2011 8:49:00 PM
Detailed and exciting story. Congratulations on your fertile poetic mind and your win. Love Joyce
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Date: 3/10/2011 7:00:00 PM
thankxx Andrea.. glad u enjoyed my little bit of humor at the end of my blue bonnet beret' ..I had a good laugh too ..when u saw that poor puppy and that beret' on his head with those ears and the stroller.. a kodak moment for sure..hahaha
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:43:00 PM
Awesome entry, Andrea. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Good luck. Thanks for your gracious comments. luv Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:40:00 PM
congratulations on being the one and only 2nd place winner!
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:52:00 PM
She is quite the goddess of temptation!! A great story you told, Andrea! Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your 2nd place win in Tell Her Story contest my friend with this dynamic story of the lass.. great write and win ..so enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/10/2011 3:30:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..I always wondered what was so alluring about Delilah and now I know..Reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2011 3:13:00 PM
Really like the name you chose for your temptress, Andrea. Was waiting for Samson to appear. LOL Enjoyed the reference to the tattoo fading if she stayed with one man. I did not use rhyming couplets in mine. It was free verse with three-line stanzas and two-line stanzas. There was one unintentional rhyme in a two-line stanza. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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