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Deception - POTD

POTD 4th Nov 2019 Vanquishing all reservation twilight's prelude heralds shadowy anticipation of a secret amorous thirst He surrenders once more to his darkest desires amplifies the sultry ambiance with star spangled bursts A slave in her entity tremulous in her splendour Captivating and illuminating this shadowy tryst yet her heart beats not in rhythm to the songs he composes she dismisses him once more
Saying… ‘it is what it is’ However, through chinks of his ardour ebbing resplendence Predominant primacy hard to resist will persist refusing to believe …’it is what it is’ refusing to believe …’it is what it is’
The intricacies of love too difficult to fathom Her preference mismatched he cannot define her daily mantra heightens sensations reserved for the one who appears to outshine?
Nothing but ineffectual is her discordant course the unyielding reality of it drives him insane and through the ebbing darkness she hears him screaming ….’it is NOT what it is It is Not what it is’
No satin ropes will tether her cosmic line of duty No romantic soft liaison would induce her to stay Tremulous and tender her love cruelly wanders from his romantic serenade she turns her light away Succumbs to his enemy…Day
whispering softly…. ‘it is what it is It is what it is’
POTD 4th Nov 2019

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Date: 1/31/2020 1:24:00 PM
Finally I managed to come upon a poem of yours which had escaped my attention, Maria! It is beautiful and pulls at my heart strings as emotional LOVE spins from dark to light. This merits a FAV...and belated congrats on p.o.t.d. Warm regards // paul
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Date: 2/1/2020 1:14:00 AM
Thank you Paul, this is very sweet of you, so glad you liked it. I appreciate your support as always....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/19/2019 12:28:00 AM
Love is like sweetness, you cannot explain it... you just need a little bit of honey to know without saying anything...
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Date: 11/19/2019 3:54:00 AM
That's very true, artificial sweetener, will that do? Thanks Haloo, I really appreciate your visit and comments my friend. How are things in the US?....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/18/2019 10:07:00 AM
Spectacular presentation. Congrats on your POTD, Maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/19/2019 3:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, glad you liked it. I truly appreciate your visit.....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/18/2019 6:55:00 AM
Love this, Maria! Nicely done! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/19/2019 3:58:00 AM
Glad you liked it Kim, nice to see you. Thanks so much for the visit and lovely comment....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/14/2019 12:09:00 PM
what trust have thee, that which is sacred is mire in verse?
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/14/2019 7:00:00 PM
Its just a fantasy poem, a love between the Moon and Sun and the Night between....Maria
Date: 11/13/2019 7:25:00 AM
I will never hear “It is what it is.” again in the same way. It seems my day is off to another good start. Hugs Rick. Also a belated congrats on your POTD.
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Date: 11/14/2019 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Rick, really appreciate your visits and support my friend. Nice that this poem gave you something to ponder on :)....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/12/2019 2:23:00 PM
Hello Maria Williams, yes that would be deception. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2019 6:20:00 PM
Hello Maria williams, I am doing fine thank you. Yes this poem is beautifully written. have a nice evening my friend.x Darlene
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/13/2019 5:09:00 AM
Hi Darlene, how are you? Lovely to see you again my friend. So glad you liked this. Take care....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/8/2019 12:46:00 AM
Belated congratulations Maria on POTD for this poetic gem. Tom
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Date: 11/8/2019 4:28:00 AM
Thanks Tom, so good to see you. How have you been?...Maria Hugs
Date: 11/5/2019 9:00:00 AM
Dear sweet friend Maria, a great pleasure to be back here to give due respect to your beautiful poetry.. Congratulations on your POTD honour! Well earned.. Love and hugs.
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Date: 11/6/2019 12:15:00 AM
Thanks so much for the return visit my dearest Besma. Truly appreciate your kindness and support always ...Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 9:37:00 PM
-- whispering softly…. ‘it is what it is’ -- Indeed! Your thoughts take me to another time, another place. My heart feels each and every emotion within. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. I am in awe. Congratulations Maria, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Brandy, i appreciate the visit and lovely comments always. Take care....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 3:18:00 PM
An intriguing write Maria, Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 11/5/2019 6:07:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, so glad you liked it...Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 1:45:00 PM
I knew it... Congrats on POTD..
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 6:06:00 AM
You must have some psychic connection, I didn't expect it, but it was a pleasant surprise. Thanks always for the support you've always shown me Si. Take care....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 1:09:00 PM
Maria, wonderfully penned, I really liked your layout and congratulations on your deserving POTD, enjoy the honor!
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 6:03:00 AM
Thanks Dear Heart, so glad you liked it....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 12:54:00 PM
Ahh Maria congrats on potd off the charts girl what can I say! I bow down! Lol seriously congrats!;)
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 6:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Brenda, I appreciate the return visit. You've been writing some awesome stuff too. Take care....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 11:16:00 AM
Such a wonderful write....a well deserved potd.... Congratulations
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 6:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Ashok, glad you liked it....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 9:49:00 AM
"It is what it is"...a masterpiece of dramatic proportion...by a master poetess of unparalleled writing...Exquisite and elegant in its execution...Congrats!! Maria on POTD!!...all my love...^WW^ :o)
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:59:00 AM
Coming from a Master like yourself John is high praise, so glad you liked this. Will be calling you soon. I thought you'd like the music. Didn't have time to turn this into a video, but working on one. Take care, and all my love....Maria Hugs
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Date: 11/4/2019 9:51:00 AM
...love the music too...:o)
Date: 11/4/2019 9:35:00 AM
What an intricate balance is struck in this piece Maria, I love the melodic refrains interspersed throughout. Congrats on an amazing write and POTD
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:56:00 AM
Coming from a musician like yourself is praise indeed. Thanks John....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 8:02:00 AM
Unrequited love... powerful words Maria...the repetition works well
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thanks so much TS, so kind of you....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on poem of the day! ;) well done!
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Casarah...Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 7:38:00 AM
Lovely romantic write Maria, thank you for letting us voyeurs into this clandestine affair. Love takes it own course. Enjoyed.
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Phil, it is what it is .....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 7:37:00 AM
A love affair of cosmic proportions as the queen of night seeks the king of the day! Heavenly love marvelously depicted in this epic masterpiece! POTD is the least of honors your poem deserves dearest, Maria! Congratulations and hugs xxx!
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:50:00 AM
A heavenly comment, thanks my dearest Demetrios. Appreciate your visit and support....Maria xxx
Date: 11/4/2019 6:59:00 AM
Stunning write Maria. An absolute gem! Congratulations my dear friend on POTD.
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:49:00 AM
Thanks my friend, glad you liked it Charlie.....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 6:47:00 AM
The victims of the "vampirous" affair long for the secrecy of darkness.....a sensuously eerie write Maria
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:47:00 AM
So glad you liked it John, thank you....Maria Hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 6:23:00 AM
Back with congrats Maria, on a well deserved poem of the day.
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Maria Williams
Date: 11/5/2019 5:46:00 AM
Thanks for the return visit Vijay. Appreciate it...Hugs Maria
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