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For Miranda Hawley's This Acrostic Or That Acrostic Poetry Contest

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DAYSTAR

During the daytime, we’re ruled by the sun.
Allegorically, the Daystar is God’s son.
Yes, I have faith in the Bringer of Light.
Stars do not always shine only at night.
Turn to the truth, for it is bright.
As is God’s love, God’s light too is true.
Redemption it brings, for me and for you.

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Miranda Hawley

August 18, 2024 at 11:27 AM

Agreed that "Allegorically, the Daystar is God’s son." and true, that starts don't always shine only at night. This was a good poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Duke Beaufort

August 9, 2024 at 1:46 PM

Andrea, you're having a lot of fun with nature and faith with this. There are certainly a lot of wonderful phenomena to enchant us. Smiling!

Karen Jones

August 4, 2024 at 1:57 PM

I love this! Amen!

Weston Gregory

August 4, 2024 at 9:07 AM

The light that guide, in essence a source of grace. A nugget if ever there was one.

Joe Maverick

August 3, 2024 at 12:00 AM

May God bless you and all thats yours ! Write on No doubt you have had some hiccups since you Wrote this Andrea.' Its the way of passing things To lash back at us.' A bit like a boat going down A river watch ouf for ( low down boughs )

Valsa George

August 2, 2024 at 8:43 PM

I liked the daystar being made synonymous with God's son.... the source of all light. The spiritual dimension given to the poem makes it stand out. All the Best, Andrea.

Yann Rolland

August 2, 2024 at 12:20 AM

faith is a good thing, it ca brinng light to the soul, it depends what you think, enjoyed your poem

Ink Empress

August 1, 2024 at 2:19 PM

Stars do not always shine at night, i agree and if only one would look and see, and even when theres light theres so much more we should remember to see: but as always it is in darkness we see and observe and stop to reflect; i went a bit deep with that line but this overall depicts i think daystar very well dear sweet andrea! Surely will be a top win! Best wishes. Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2024 at 5:00 PM

Thanks. I had fun with this contest

Eileen Manassian

August 1, 2024 at 2:08 PM

Amen. Preach on! Every line a mini sermon.. done with your usual finesse. Andrea... you're so gifted. Blessings and thanks for your comments on my blog and poem.

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2024 at 4:59 PM

You are so sweet, Eileen. I have been exploring reports of NDE'd and they are giving me a deeper understanding of God and the whole purpose of our brief time on earth.

Silent One

August 1, 2024 at 1:32 PM

A religious take on the daystar... which has biblical references.. nicely done dear Andrea..

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2024 at 5:00 PM

Thanks, S.O.

Sam Kauffman

August 1, 2024 at 10:16 AM

Hi Andrea! Your faith shines in these lines like the Morning Star. Love the line "stars do not always shine only at night." Spoken in truth with a poetic beauty. You have written a lovely acrostic. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you!

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2024 at 5:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sam