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This free verse poem is written in a new form created by Robert Lindley

Lind30 SU 7-7-7-9

Plates shifting beneath the sea. Mountains rising in the flat land. Energy creates a man. Faith changes I can’t, into I can.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/26/2022 12:50:00 PM

really like the last line. I do believe in the power of 'faith.' thank you

Bill Baker
Date: 6/27/2022 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, for always reading and commenting on my poetry, Sara. Blessings, Bill

Miranda Hawley

Date: 6/1/2022 3:13:00 AM

"Energy creates a man. Faith changes I can’t, into I can." Exactly

Bill Baker
Date: 6/1/2022 7:52:00 AM

Thanks for the comments on my poetry, Miranda. I visit yours later. :-) Bill

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/20/2022 11:59:00 AM

We cannot live without faith, nor do I want to ever - everything in our lives are parallel to it. We build our homes on the foundations of Gods graciousness. Clever last line Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/20/2022 5:35:00 PM

Faith pleases God, that makes it important in my life. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Anil Deo

Date: 5/20/2022 5:37:00 AM

Live last line ... Possibilities are endless, hallelujah ??

Bill Baker
Date: 5/20/2022 5:34:00 PM

Thank God. Thank you for the comment, Anil. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Robert Gorelick

Date: 5/19/2022 2:49:00 PM

Excellent analogy Bill, dynamic power of faith! Robert

Bill Baker
Date: 5/19/2022 4:24:00 PM

Thanks, Robert, I've been reading your Limericks ... they're great. Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/19/2022 12:42:00 PM

Faith changes everything Bill. Look at the Bumblebee; no one told her she cannot fly!

Bill Baker
Date: 5/19/2022 4:24:00 PM

Great example, Caren. without them we'd have apple trees without apple. :-( Have a pleasant day, Bill

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/18/2022 1:40:00 PM

A seismic collection of thought here Bill.' Faith and growth going hand In hand.' Just like it was always planned.' There is no nature, all comes From our Creator.'

Bill Baker
Date: 5/18/2022 7:35:00 PM

I agree, Joe. We are so blessed. Smiles and blessings my friend, Bill

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/18/2022 1:16:00 PM

Faith can move mountains, they say, this is so inspiring, Bill~

Bill Baker
Date: 5/18/2022 7:34:00 PM

Glad it worked with you Michelle. Have a great week my friend, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/18/2022 3:47:00 AM

Faith is indeed a powerful force, much like the Teutonic Plates shifting and the mountains rising....well said, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/18/2022 7:34:00 PM

Thanks, Sara. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/17/2022 7:37:00 PM

Love the last line, Bill. Love, Love, LOVE it! (btw: Thanks for choosing such a narrow topic to cover in just four lines... Somehow, you did it!). Smiles for Miles, Gershon

Bill Baker
Date: 5/18/2022 7:33:00 PM

Thank you, my friend. Glad you liked it. Bill

Valerie Staton

Date: 5/17/2022 6:43:00 PM

Yes! FAITH is the key! Makes ways out of no ways. A little means a lot.

Bill Baker
Date: 5/18/2022 7:33:00 PM

I agree, Valerie. Thanks for the comment. Bill