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he panted heavily muscles twitching in his naked body running frenzied, without looking back, he shouted, “He is after me.... my life” a rip roaring cry....! the traffic halted pedestrians stopped people from shops came out women through curtained windows peeped children stopped their play “so drunk”.... a man murmured “A crack”.... someone shouted “coming right after an orgy” sneered, an oldie... “pity on him...! Take him to an asylum” one gentleman suggested. he needs help, majority opined ‘nab this plague’, the moral police quipped what is he running from...? an assailant....? corona virus....? his own phantom...? two sane men staying, at a corner wondered. they had masks on their face “must be a health worker”..! one of them said... “yes, the subtle nuances of a cracked mind” the other agreed! as the scene on the road, had grown into a high voltage drama, dissensions grew and multiplied! March.10. 2023 ~Placed Second~ Cracked Poetry Contest Sponsor- Anthony Biaanco

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Date: 3/17/2023 3:26:00 AM
Back with congratulations:)
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Date: 3/11/2023 5:38:00 PM
Very imaginative and suspenseful, Valsa. I like the part where people try to get into the character's mind. It could be someone we'd see somewhere.
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Date: 3/11/2023 9:15:00 AM
How suspenseful and mysterious, very apt description 'nuances of a cracked mind' skillfully displayed here~
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Date: 3/11/2023 3:51:00 AM
Wow what a story ! Great imagination at play there Valsa. Well written.
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Date: 3/10/2023 6:23:00 AM
Valsa, this's an excellent poem, and you've come up with an ingenious idea for the contest. This has happened to me so frequently, walked these winding alleyways that were filled with nothing but complete desolation and emptiness. Good luck with the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 3/10/2023 5:33:00 AM
Ahhh!! You left me wondering so a very good work. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 3/10/2023 12:57:00 AM
Well said, Valsa; I've seen this more often than I want to recall. Walked these twisted corridors of utter loneliness and despair. Insanity, drug addition, demon possession, human tragedies all too common now days. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 3/9/2023 10:49:00 PM
Very interesting Valsa, like the opening scene to a book :)
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Date: 3/9/2023 6:02:00 PM
To many of them running around like this, can't figure them all out : ). , Great poem , and brilliant theme for contest
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Date: 3/9/2023 5:54:00 PM
Wow!
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