Cracked

he panted heavily
muscles twitching in his naked body
running frenzied, without looking back,
he shouted, “He is after me.... my life”
a rip roaring cry....!

the traffic halted
pedestrians stopped
people from shops came out
women through curtained windows peeped
children stopped their play

“so drunk”.... a man murmured
“A crack”.... someone shouted
“coming right after an orgy”
sneered, an oldie...
“pity on him...! Take him to an asylum”
one gentleman suggested.
he needs help, majority opined
‘nab this plague’, the moral police quipped

what is he running from...? 

an assailant....?
corona virus....?
his own phantom...?
two sane men staying, 
at a corner wondered.
they had masks on their face
“must be a health worker”..!
one of them said...
“yes, the subtle nuances of a cracked mind”
the other agreed!

as the scene on the road, 
had grown into a high voltage drama,
dissensions grew and multiplied!

March.10. 2023

~Placed Second~

Cracked Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Anthony Biaanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bayles Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Very imaginative and suspenseful, Valsa. I like the part where people try to get into the character's mind. It could be someone we'd see somewhere.
Faulkner Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 9:15 AM
How suspenseful and mysterious, very apt description 'nuances of a cracked mind' skillfully displayed here~
Volumes Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 3:51 AM
Wow what a story ! Great imagination at play there Valsa. Well written.
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Valsa, this's an excellent poem, and you've come up with an ingenious idea for the contest. This has happened to me so frequently, walked these winding alleyways that were filled with nothing but complete desolation and emptiness. Good luck with the contest, dear friend.
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Ahhh!! You left me wondering so a very good work. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
DiMino Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Well said, Valsa; I've seen this more often than I want to recall. Walked these twisted corridors of utter loneliness and despair. Insanity, drug addition, demon possession, human tragedies all too common now days. Blessings my friend.
McBride  Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:02 PM
To many of them running around like this, can't figure them all out : ). , Great poem , and brilliant theme for contest
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Wow!
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