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C ountry roots beckon regrets of past transgression O ne-way ticket meant to soothe my innermost obsession M emories of you not fading with passing of the years I mmortal flame has kept alive cherished souvenirs N aively thinking I’d drift and just avoid the truth G ames were played in the foolish gardens of my youth B almy nights not forgotten in the heat of summertide A ugust breezes summon me to return home by your side C innabar and cinnamon reverie of your perfume in moonlight K aleidoscopic magic remembered in your eyes at midnight H eartstrings of surrender repentant to bygone wanderlust O pen your heart and grant me a chance to earn again your trust M oonstruck and lovesick ready to prove myself and pay my due E nchanted under your spell I’ve come back home to you AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on February 14, 2021 for contest COMING BACK HOME sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 3/8/2021 1:40:00 PM
What a great, heart-warming poem! If we could only go back again...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2021 6:11:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ann ~
Date: 3/8/2021 8:27:00 AM
Line, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/8/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. Most appreciated ~
Date: 3/7/2021 12:59:00 PM
Hi Line, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/7/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis. Much appreciated ~
Date: 3/7/2021 11:56:00 AM
An excellent write Line, enjoyed very much, congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:55:00 PM
Thanks, John. Most appreciated 2nd place in your contest.
Date: 2/23/2021 7:09:00 AM
Best wishes for a win. Beautiful poem with deep meaning.
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Date: 2/23/2021 9:02:00 AM
Thanks, Frances. Much appreciated ~
Date: 2/19/2021 8:39:00 PM
Such a beauty, love the imagery.. Wishing you all the best for the contest as well!
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Date: 2/20/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wilma ~
Date: 2/18/2021 7:30:00 AM
Sure to top the winner's list, dear Line. This one goes to my fav list. Truly touching. Elaine
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Date: 2/18/2021 8:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Elaine. Most appreciated ~
Date: 2/17/2021 4:51:00 AM
Wow!!! Such a lovely acrostic with great flow and message... This will be a winner for sure...
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thanks for your vote of confidence, Supraja ~
Date: 2/16/2021 2:32:00 PM
good luck this should be a shoe in for the contest...glad I didn't' enter now..A fav
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Date: 2/16/2021 7:18:00 PM
Nora ! LOL ~ thanks for the compliment
Date: 2/16/2021 7:18:00 AM
So happy to see your skills are still at work Line. Your adventures into brevity and new forms of expression. Your recovery seems to be moving forward. I was concerned, you'd been so kind.
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Date: 2/16/2021 8:28:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely message, Greg ~ most appreciated
Date: 2/16/2021 4:57:00 AM
Wow! So delightful and delighting from the start til the end. Thanks for sharing. Thanks likewise for your uplifting compliments...
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Date: 2/16/2021 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Beata ~ most appreciated
Date: 2/15/2021 9:22:00 PM
Wonderful acrostic! I really like what you did with G.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/16/2021 8:29:00 AM
Of course that's your favorite ~ lol Hugs xx
Date: 2/15/2021 4:40:00 PM
Great work Line! That read like a winner to me!
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Date: 2/15/2021 5:03:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Chuck ~
Date: 2/15/2021 3:55:00 PM
A wonderful poem you've entered, Line. My favorite line is the closing line, "Enchanted under your spell I’ve come back home to you". :)
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Date: 2/15/2021 5:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Angela ~
Date: 2/15/2021 8:51:00 AM
Line, Oh the garden games stayin' up past midnight on a schoolnight. What a time it must've been. So easy to leave, and so hard to return though youth calls us back home. -Richard
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:19:00 AM
So true, Richard ~
Date: 2/14/2021 8:00:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome! A FAVE for me, and a great contest entry, Line! Please know that this felt totally real as I read it. Powerful penning, my friend. :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2021 5:50:00 AM
What awesome feedback, Gershon. I am so pleased. Thank you so much ~

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