Christmas

. Christmas cheer Presents unwrapped on floor, lying askew as Christmas tree blinks Silver, gold, red, green promises, laughter. What of those with no tree a gift of worn shoes, old doll, recycled dress. care, and share Christmas day. December 9, 2022 For Writing Challenge - Yalto Form Poetry Contest By Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 1/2/2023 1:40:00 PM

Ann, a very touching Yalto poem! And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, Constance

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/21/2022 6:12:00 PM

Ann, a wonderful Christmas poem, congratulations on your winning placement!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2022 11:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Ann :) - I wish you a Merry Christmas :) -

Ann Peck
Date: 12/21/2022 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine Smile! A Merry Christmas to you, too.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/20/2022 8:43:00 AM

Way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/20/2022 1:23:00 AM

"Christmas tree blinks" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/19/2022 4:53:00 PM

Wonderful, touching Yalto, Ann:-) I hope you write more. Congratulations on your win!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/17/2022 5:41:00 AM

Sweet, sweet write Ann. It's sad we think of others needs only at Christmastime. hugs! :)

Ann Peck
Date: 12/17/2022 3:51:00 PM

It is, Linda. And there are so many needing care. Thanks for your nice comments.

Valsa George

Date: 12/10/2022 8:38:00 PM

Amid all Christmas gaiety, a thought of the less privileged and the needy makes the Christmas spirit complete. Well written in Yalto Form. Best of luck Ann

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/9/2022 6:16:00 PM

Great message, Ann. We need to share more often! Bol in the contest~Anaya