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Can You Hear Me God

Can you hear me God, are you up there listening to my words, I have lots of questions for you to answer, lots of whys; Like, why did you take my big sister far up above to be with you, Mother said you needed a little girl with wings in heaven. Why did you not take me instead, then mother would not cry, And father would not weep when he was talking of her; And God why did you make me different from other little girls, Why was I so quiet and lonely reading books and writing. I was not like other little kids, I was always thinking of things, Wanting to explore nature instead of playing with others; Refusing to eat animals and weeping because they were killed. Are you there God, can you explain life and all to this girl. I understand why you took my true love from me that day, He was always driving his car too fast, he was doomed; But God, why my babies could you have not left them here, As I stand at their grave with clenched fists, I ask you why. Are you listening to me God, can you tell me why I write, Why do I have this need and passion for words on paper; I understand that mother was sick, but father why so suddenly, Do you have a purpose for me in this life, if so what is it. Well God, I guess that's it for now, please give mother a hug, And father and all the rest I love you have taken up above; Even those pets that shattered my heart when they departed, Are you there God, why is there so much suffering in the world. Well, I'm waiting, God . . . ______________________________ October 14, 2015 Poetry/Narrative/Can You Hear Me God Copyright Protected, ID 15-717-069-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Are You There God, sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 11/28/2015 9:46:00 AM
The question of why God takes loved ones to heaven and leaves us to suffer, especially innocent children, and car accidents, is an untruth not compatible with him being the God of love. See JW.org for the answer, my poem in the name of God addresses this error in the way those who supposedly represent God actually paint him cruel, a great misrepresentation that disullusions those grieving the loss of loved ones. Hope you find comfort I feel your pain. John
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Constance La France
Date: 11/28/2015 3:05:00 PM
John, thanks for visiting and for the great comment ~
Date: 11/2/2015 10:32:00 PM
Wow. What an emotional write. Almost missed this one, BW. Congrats on your win. Your story leaves me wanting to give you a big hug. You have certainly experienced a lot of heartache and pain but I can better see why you are such a great poet and compassionate human being. Keep on sharing your heart with us. It is beautiful. Hugs. Janece
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Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2015 12:06:00 AM
Janece, thanks for visiting, yes I have had a tangled life full of sadness but of it came this desire to write and I always say that my sorrow has made me the poet I am, someone else said to me once that a poet must suffer to be a good poet and I think that is true ~
Date: 10/22/2015 11:03:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings. Great win and great write. I have tears as I write this. Thanks. Someday, there will be no questions; only answers. Until then GBU.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2015 12:08:00 AM
Curtis, odd how some themes just take us that place deep within and the tears that drip from our pen onto the paper amaze even the poet writing them, thanks for the visit ~
Date: 10/20/2015 7:48:00 AM
Love this deeply emotional and excellent poetic write my friend. I see it won a contest, big congrats onthat too. A7
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Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2015 12:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert for the nice comment, congrats and the 7 ~
Date: 10/19/2015 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Broken Wings!
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations Broken... SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2015 1:54:00 PM
Lovely, BW. You are also rather demanding aren't you?
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:00:00 PM
You were able to pour out your heart to God with this write, BW...poetry. Congratulations on your awesome win! hugs!
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:11:00 AM
Many will see your poem as sad, but what I see is a love that is wondrous in its depth. Yes, you have lost many people you loved, and that pain is not to be minimized-- BUT YOU LOVED, AND WERE LOVED. And that love, as my mother told me with the last words she spoke to me, never goes away. If you leave it to God for the timing, you will see them again; I suspect they can see you now, as they wait with the patience of eternity. And when you are reunited, I expect all the sadness will be forgotten.
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Date: 10/17/2015 7:23:00 AM
Oh dear dear Wings! May God give you more strength! Congrats on your win! You deserve every bit of it!
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Date: 10/16/2015 12:49:00 PM
bw, your Beautiful words fill my eye....but we lack the wisdom to truly know why....only when we truly know another's thoughts....should the answers to your questions be sought....so be strong for another day....and when it's time, you will be on your way....to rejoin the ones you most Love....at the Great Family Reunion Up Above....;)
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Date: 10/16/2015 10:10:00 AM
Hey BW, a warm and hearty congratulations on your win!! A wonderful piece full of deep and heartfelt questions and searching for answers that only our Heavenly Father can answer for us. Isn't is wonderful though that He knows what's best for us all. Beautifully written and expressed. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 10/16/2015 1:40:00 AM
Congrats on your superb write n win broken! Well keep ur faith alive!
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Date: 10/16/2015 12:48:00 AM
A lovely, poignant write, BW, and hopefully cathartic. Congrats, Viv x
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Date: 10/15/2015 10:55:00 PM
Broken Wings beautiful win!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:37:00 PM
A 7 doesn't adequately express my reaction to this profoundly meaningful, bittersweet poem. I give it a 10. I love it! Congratulations Janice
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Date: 10/15/2015 8:22:00 PM
Wings, much have you suffered to pen this write! Every words rips with pain. Congrats and love, Balveen
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Date: 10/15/2015 6:36:00 PM
BW, this is such a moving heartfelt write. You have skilfully penned some questions that we all could relate to. Good job. Congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 10/15/2015 6:02:00 PM
Am in awe of this poem, constance! Frankly wants me to give you a bear hug, so sad.Hope you are not so lonely now!!
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Date: 10/15/2015 5:23:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Broken, for your outstanding win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/15/2015 5:08:00 PM
Awesome, Broken Wings. This is why you are here. To write your incredible poems. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 10/15/2015 4:05:00 PM
Such an emotional poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/15/2015 7:51:00 AM
He made you perfectly Constance. Even through loss you have remained a beautiful soul.
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Date: 10/14/2015 1:17:00 PM
Your questions express great sadness that only he can answer. A deep heartfelt write from the heart, I'm sorry you have endured such turmoil in your life. Hugs
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Date: 10/14/2015 11:42:00 AM
Heartfelt ...
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