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Bit Long In the Tooth!

He was told, "Yes, you have grounds for divorce!" His new lawyer, said, "We will win...of course!" A pretty 'filly' back then But his love faded just when... She had started to look more like a horse!

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Audrey Haick

Date: 8/30/2010 6:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Carrie! Hilarious! ...Peace, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2010 11:46:00 AM

hehe, made me chuckle with this one Carrie. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 4:59:00 AM

Congrats on the win for this well deserved write, Carrie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 6:57:00 PM

I LOVE this one, Carrie. Exellent, and congrats. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/29/2010 4:16:00 PM

meter, meter, meter...fret He was told you have grounds for divorce/da da DUM(he was TOLD) da da DUM (you have GOUNDS) da da DUM (for de VORCE). da DUM da DUM (His LAWyer SAID) da DUM (we'll WIN) da DUM (of course)...smmmmmmmmmmmmmoooochhh Heeee lllllll ooooooo from number #14 ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 1:53:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your big win in the Limerick contest ... enjoy this happy Sunday with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/29/2010 12:54:00 PM

Congrats on this laugher! BG

Timothy Brumley

Date: 8/29/2010 12:51:00 PM

Well, t'wasn't love, but lust, anyway! Congrats on your win Carrie!

John Freeman

Date: 8/29/2010 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations, Carrie, on your successful presentation in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/29/2010 12:22:00 PM

Great work Carrie. really funny. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2010 12:04:00 PM

Only Mr. Ed would have stayed with her, Carrie. LOL Congratulations on your win! The competition was awesome and every contestant deserves a round of applause. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/29/2010 11:49:00 AM

cute one , congrats on your win

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/27/2010 7:37:00 PM

funnny...he probably looks like a jack in the box!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2010 2:36:00 PM

Okay...Sad that this is truth that some men's love isn't love after all...Suppose that there is a bit of humor here....Thanks for stopping by my blog and the prayers and encouraging words that you have given during this time..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 8/27/2010 12:01:00 PM

Haaaaa! Cool Carrie, An't that just like a man. Smile! Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/27/2010 2:29:00 AM

interesting reading between the lines here also, enjoyed. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2010 11:16:00 AM

You have a mighty fine limerick here Carrie. I wish you the best in Carolyn's contest. Which reminds me I have to go try to write one for her. Love, Carol

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 8/25/2010 4:51:00 PM

Oh Oh. I hope he didn't start calling her " Ed." Then she could whiny: " Wilbur!" and we start all over again in appeals court. Thank as always, my dear. Love, Gerard

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/25/2010 2:39:00 PM

:) Thanks for supporting my contest, Carrie. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/25/2010 1:10:00 PM

The poor woman, he could have sorted the problem out with a dentist instead of divorce hehe.. Great write Carrie :)