JC Brul Poet Monchielle Stanza

Beside the Sea - POTD

Beside the sea I wait~
the dreamy dawn to shine
and paint horizon's hue
in tawny, taupe and teal
unveiling vivid view.

Beside the sea I wait~
the early birds in flight
arching like tiara 
making sky a painting 
of placid aurora.

Beside the sea I wait~
the whisper of the breeze
soaring as sunshine sings
her stellar symphony
reviving lost musings.

Beside the sea I wait~
the crashing of the waves
sparkling like sunlit snow
as they return to shore
my love will, too, I know.

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Les Pick October 24, 2022 at 7:44 PM Thanks JCB for sharing this picturesque poem. A nice read.

Constance La France April 17, 2022 at 3:29 PM JCB, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance

Len Gasun April 16, 2022 at 10:46 PM Splendid poem and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on your win and this superb monchielle poem! Hugs

Kim Rodrigues April 16, 2022 at 5:45 PM Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2022 at 4:21 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2022 at 9:34 AM Back with Congratulations on this new win. I love your "Beside the sea" write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Terry Miller April 15, 2022 at 12:41 AM Congratulations on a fine poem and a well-deserved win.

Valsa George April 14, 2022 at 10:22 PM I missed seeing this as poem of the day ! Now let me convey my double congratulations on your excellent win and the POTD

Joanna Daniel April 14, 2022 at 10:12 PM Congratulations on POTD and your win:) I love this one:)

Unseeking Seeker April 14, 2022 at 9:40 PM Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest!

Christuraj Alex April 14, 2022 at 8:33 PM Congratulations, again!

Ken Rone April 12, 2022 at 8:24 AM This is a wonderful piece in a challenging format. I wish you the best in the contest. - Ken

Anil Deo April 10, 2022 at 7:54 PM JCBB, congrats. I take it as good advice from your poem: "Beside the sea, I wait."

Brandy Nicole April 10, 2022 at 7:13 PM This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic, so soft and serene. Your thoughts whisper along the page with such elegance and grace. I'm drifting in these tender moments. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 10:00 PM Thank you Brandy...That's what I feel as I write this poem. More blessings to you.

Panagiota Romios April 10, 2022 at 6:35 PM So happy to see you hold the POTD for today! The comparison between sea and love is soothing. Perfect read for Palm Sunday! Pangie JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 9:59 PM Thank you Pangie..

Eve Roper April 10, 2022 at 5:27 PM great painting, JCB, congratulations on POTD. Blessings my friend JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 9:56 PM Thank you dear Eve. More blessing to you.

Debra L Brown April 10, 2022 at 1:11 PM Beautifully penned, Congrats on POTD. Blessings ~ Debra JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:13 PM Thank you Debra.

Paulette Calasibetta April 10, 2022 at 12:01 PM Wonderful POTD! "Beside the sea I wait" your imagery fascinating! :)Paulette JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:10 PM Thank you Paulette.

Victor Buhagiar April 10, 2022 at 10:28 AM Congrats for your POTD. JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:10 PM Thanks much!!

Michelle Faulkner April 10, 2022 at 10:25 AM So glad to see this as POTD, happy to return with congratulations! JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:09 PM Thank you again Michelle.

Bill Baker April 10, 2022 at 8:38 AM Congratulations on your POTD, JCB, and good luck in the contest! Bill JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:09 PM Thank you Bill.

Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2022 at 8:36 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A beautiful sea write. I am walking in the sand with the birds flying over head. Have a great/blessed day.................... JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:08 PM Thank you Paula. That moment is so sublime!

Christuraj Alex April 10, 2022 at 8:13 AM Wow! "Beside the sea I wait" - Beautiful! Congratulations! JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:07 PM Thanks you so much.

L Milton Hankins April 10, 2022 at 8:12 AM A beautiful poem, beautifully-written, JCB. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.! JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:06 PM Thank you Milton. Blessings.

Mike Gentile April 10, 2022 at 7:08 AM Such a beautiful expression of love an yearning JCB! Congratulations on your POTD honors for your romantic write full of lovely imagery!! JC Brul April 10, 2022 at 1:06 PM Thank you Mike.

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