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October.7.2023

Etheree Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Ink Express

Bee I am. A tiny, winging insect. A friend to all folks and lovely blooms alike. Each morn I set out merry, humming a delectable tune, in rain and sun, never taking rest, to feast on honey and gather pollen. The charming flowers freshly bathed in dew, keenly wait for my daily visit. Flitting from flower to flower, like a young lover, I flirt, with my beauties whole day. From each bloom I sup to my heart's fill. By evening, join my, queen

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 8:02:00 AM

Back with huge congratulations Valsa! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 11:02:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:49:00 AM

Unique and descriptive write this is beautiful soul! I love many lines in this and the way you’ve written about bees and painted imagery in a creative manner is truly stunning! I especially love how you’ve described the tune of in rain or sun, feasting on honey, as well as how you’ve written about flowers, freshly bathed in dew! I can almost see and smell! Thank you for writing! Congratulations

Valsa George
Date: 10/13/2023 5:50:00 AM

Empress, despite the fact that you stand head and shoulders above many of us, you have an encouraging word for everyone, a quality greatly appreciated ! Thanks a lot dear one for the contest and placing my poem in the winner's list.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/11/2023 7:03:00 AM

Sweetness in your ether Valsa. "...Flitting from flower to flower, like a young lover, I flirt..." Such a cute line! Very nice :)

Bill Baker

Date: 10/10/2023 4:53:00 PM

A complete bio of the life of a bee, in this finely crafted Etheree, Valsa. You're on a contest roll. Ever entry written at a contender level. I'm impressed. I hope the judges are too, my friend. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/9/2023 6:33:00 AM

Valsa, your Etheree on the daily existence of a bee is truly exceptional. Your words have painted a vivid and awe-inspiring portrayal of their life, showcasing your masterful talent in every line.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2023 1:12:00 PM

- A lovely busy bee, Valsa :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 10/8/2023 12:32:00 PM

Great poem. I can feel bees buzzing in my garden,

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/7/2023 8:07:00 PM

so wonderful, Valsa i would have dream to write that, from flower to flower, so cute, have a sweet sunday poet

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/7/2023 7:24:00 PM

Oh my, I adore this poem dear beautiful soul! The way you've illustrated the lively and playful attitude of the bee, who swirls upon petals of different flowers and dances with a buzzing tone..Wow,I'm really mesmerized and this is definitely one of the best takes on the etheree form.."In rain and sun, never taking rest, to feast on honey and gather pollen", "Flitting from flower to flower, like a young lover, I flirt" Awh, that description of behaving like a young lover! This is a fav for me :)

Tom Woody

Date: 10/7/2023 6:07:00 AM

Just don't come buzzing around inside my house, Mr. Bee. Had to kill a wasp the other day lol. Awesome etheree Valsa

Debjani Mitra

Date: 10/7/2023 5:17:00 AM

Oooh...This is a Classic..Simply sweet

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/7/2023 4:16:00 AM

Outstanding Etheree, Valsa. You've beautifully and masterfully crafted the daily life of a bee. I found this creation lovely and certainly worthy of a contest win. Fingers crossed for you. Thanks for sharing your words and your spirit. Enjoy your day, Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/7/2023 2:22:00 AM

Awww a lovely buzz poem... I like you take on the bee, buzzing from flower to flower.. like a little player stealing nectar... nature is such a beautiful thing, i was a keen gardener and my garden is full of overgrown plants and bushes, but i love the wilderness nature of it and it brings so much joy when bees and butterflies take my offerings for them.. Ink will love this one.. cpy