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Success is About Attainable Goals | Jeremy Ryan Slate

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Clockwork progressions and the explainable, shed light on the ever-debatable; in retrospect we ever only saw the attainable.

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Silent One

Date: 3/16/2024 8:08:00 AM

Very clever and well expressed..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 5:53:00 PM

thank you, kind sir! Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 3/15/2024 6:30:00 PM

Clever poetry, Sara. I like it! Hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/16/2024 4:36:00 AM

thank you, Bill...just for the record, I 'like' you :-)

Don Iannone

Date: 3/15/2024 4:15:00 PM

Were I to continue your masterpiece: In the shadow of dreams, so unrestrainable, We chase through the night, so indefatigable; Yet in our hearts, what's lost is unclaimable, A dance with fate, beautifully inescapable.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 6:03:00 PM

thanks for visiting, Don...and what lovely, poetic additions you made...they spoke to me. Thanks ever so much for sharing. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/15/2024 3:29:00 PM

Great. We see what we want to see. Nothing better than an optimistic outlook.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 6:03:00 PM

wise words, Gershon...we see what we want to see. We control the narrative...best to be positive about it. Have a great weekend, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/15/2024 8:38:00 AM

"Saw the attainable" -- limited by developed senses but not substance. A head scratcher I enjoyed.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 6:02:00 PM

appreciate your visit, Joe...yes, I think my poem was a bit of a head scratcher :-) enjoy your weekend, Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/15/2024 8:36:00 AM

Great one Sara . I hope you have a nice day :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 6:01:00 PM

appreciate your visit, Heidi. Grateful for your wishes for a nice day...I did have one...busy but purposeful. Have a splendid weekend...appreciate your ongoing support, hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2024 7:54:00 AM

- Well written, Sara :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 6:00:00 PM

awww, thanks Anne-Lise. Wishing you a splendid weekend as well, hugs Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/15/2024 6:14:00 AM

that is the only way to move ahead but only seeing the attainable, and when it isn't we create it , lol, thanks for the upbeat poem today, thinking of you :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 6:00:00 PM

your words remind of 'what a man conceives and believes...' I appreciate your insightful and wise comments. I agree with you. Thinking of you as well...hope all is well with you. Enjoy your weekend, hugs, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 3/15/2024 5:59:00 AM

It only takes a titch of a longer reach to make things attainable. Your creative mind has been busy and I'm loving your new posts.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/15/2024 5:59:00 PM

thank you, Lin, for your visit and for noticing a transitional shift in my poetic writing. Been thinking and seeing differently for some reason. I don't question it...just going with it...feeling a bit more creative these days probably due to less stress. Have a splendid weekend, hugs, Sara