At the Pawn Shop

Casino down the street, rings lined a mile long 
Is this a gambling habit or marriages gone wrong? 
How'd they get so many guitars strings still in place 
Wood polish shines brightly inside the velvet case 

And what about those guns and tools ? 
Belong to a broken man perhaps gambling fools?
But look at the other side filled packed with toys 
The things a child would miss or no longer boys?

Gruff faces all around rather spooky yet demure 
"Our junk will soon be yours" take the Pawn shop tour!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Congrats on your winning poem.
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 7:24 AM
Judy nicely expressed. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A  Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 12:48 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 10:30 PM
i enjoyed the little tour Judy. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lanre Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations Judy. Lovely piece there. GL
Gorelick Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Clever write Judy..congrats. BG
Pettit Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Judy.
A   Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 3:11 PM
Judy, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 2:49 PM
A sad place & a sad poem for it! You nailed the emotion. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 12:31 PM
Wish you congratulation on your win, loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:47 AM
I like this one a lot Judy, congratulations.
Manassian Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 6:38 AM
I agree with Andrea! You've got an excellent job with this. I could never write one for this...or maybe...well, no time! Judy, thanks ever so much for your post on .....my You've Written a Novel. I answered you on that. Please check if interested. :) Thanks for the encouraging word. I honestly did it because I didn't want to disappoint you! Please go back and check! LOVELY WRITE HERE! hugs!
Manassian Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 6:38 AM
DONE...DONE an excellent job! Dear me....I'm losing it! Hugs!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 12:48 AM
Judy, I love how you did this contest idea. I just can't think of anything yet and I admire you how you did yours. Thanks for my win in your contest. I'm glad I finally made the effort to do my introduction.
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 4:47 PM
I like the twist gl should do well Shadow x smile
Delaney Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Good questions to think about...... Sad that some can never buy them back. Good entry. SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 6:25 PM
The questions add another layer to the story. Good job Judy.
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