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As We Metamophose

“being mistook we burnt the book thoughts rest, we dwell in our heart’s nest touched by spirit, our body shook by God’s light blest as we undressed”
Everybody cooks at their own time and temperature.
Your journey is for you, mine, uniquely, for me. We are not 'sameness-evolved' meant to be. We all grow our spirits separately, so, too, our emotions and philosophies. Uniqueness serves our soul’s artistry. Some of us are new souls, others advanced. Earth-mingling our unique is not circumstance. If manifesting divine potential were a tangible, it would be a puzzle of pieces non-sequential. When souls combine the 'know' their lives did grow, various, glorious soul-twinkles will truth guide us. We are same totally loved, differently etched. Each of us, a spiritual beacon from His Kingdom, may, in time, entwine to design a brand new Eden.
Green is green and must be that, but blue is none the worse for it.

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Date: 4/1/2025 1:47:00 AM
Lovely write Cay Cay with a great message of individual growth.. Michael
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Date: 3/31/2025 10:18:00 PM
This is really cool. You are so spiritually aware, dear friend. Love the top and bottom quotes too. I think you have a small typo in bottom line. The word in should be is? Oh and I loved the Eden line.
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Date: 3/31/2025 9:26:00 PM
shows all how singular you and your poesy are...i like!
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Date: 3/31/2025 9:03:00 AM
Every person is unique but we have only one path to follow that of loving. You have plenty of that virtue. Hope all is progressing well in hospital. Be strong. Hugs.
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Date: 3/31/2025 10:02:00 AM
How'd ya know about the hospital? Did u see a mention somewhere? YES, all progressed so well that I'm a 1st time Grandmama, albeit, step, to a beautiful, healthy baby boy joy. I'll never have my own grand-one's, but love my step-daughter so much, that I am full blown emotionally, lovingly and maternally engaged. I have a few more days to get my baby-fixes before we drive 10 hours to get home. Happy, happy, thank u God, thank u ... CayCay
Date: 3/30/2025 10:44:00 PM
Thanks for your insightful, unique words! It's amazing that there can be so many people, and no two of them can be the same...and yet somehow, we share a common humanity.
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Date: 3/30/2025 4:41:00 PM
CayCay, I do like that we're all different and on our own journey. Our differences can be celebrated and yes as you say....together we can do something wonderful. Smiles!!
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Date: 3/30/2025 4:03:00 AM
Hi CayCay, I admire how your poem explores the profound idea that every individual's spiritual journey is uniquely their own. The opening lines immediately show a sense of personal autonomy, with you acknowledging that your path is different from another’s, emphasizing that we are not "sameness-evolved." This sets the tone for a reflection on the diversity of human experience and the individuality of spiritual growth.
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Date: 3/30/2025 3:25:00 AM
Yes, each one of us is unique. This uniqueness adds variety to life. Every one has his own journey. Another person cannot unduly interfere with our activities. Yet, we have to act as a composite whole. Wise words of wisdom dear Cay Cay.
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:05:00 PM
You are now under arrest for 'Non-Group-Think' and 27 other related crimes. ~ Big Brother Has Been Watching You
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Date: 3/29/2025 7:49:00 PM
wow! this resonated with me. i'm an Indian-- i'm often told "you all are the same" and am sterotyped. love the wording and how it contributes to your meaning. keep spreading these messages, the world needs it :3
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Date: 3/29/2025 4:28:00 PM
Wow! Your words resonate deeply! You took the contest prompt to a new level! I feel you will do well! I like this because it engages intellectually! Great writing CayCay!
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:44:00 AM
CayCay, how boring the world would be if everyone colored the leaves of a tree in the same shade of green. He made us to have free will. What we choose to do with our lives... no one is to blame but us.
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Date: 3/29/2025 10:38:00 AM
excellent ink CayCay hugs jan xx
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