Applejack

I felt a lift,
a thermal high
and out the corner
of my eye
saw angel wings

recalling angels fly -- 

thinking myself to give
it a try; no halo, of course,
just arms and hands

nor feathers for glide,
yet sensed a certified  
flying-couch on each side

offering me
a heavenly ride~

higher and higher,
into ever dearer
light – beyond our sun
we flew out of sight

zooming passed stars,
red, blue and white...
planets and moons
far smaller yet bright,
each one, its own guardian
of great mystic, celestial
might --

(seeming less to matter
which wrong or more right) -- 

back home, in my easy
porch-chair, the morning
dawn bringing our usual breath 
of clearer fresh air – feathers
fading from my sleepy
morning inner sight

an old man, blind, rocker-bound,
out for a night --
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George Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 8:43 AM
During sleep, a man journeys down to imaginary realms without wings or feathers. When morning comes, he sees himself seated on his arm chair with all fantastic experiences fading from his sight. A very enchanting poem.
DiMino Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 6:32 AM
Dreams are as great a mystery, worth exploring, as all of our awake others. Thank you, Valsa. Beautiful dreams my friend!!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:23 AM
I thought I had responded to this. Perhaps, my comment failed! The verse that begins…higher and higher, I love and love it all! No halo, just arms and legs…love those last lines too! Another fave!
DiMino Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Kim; made my day! Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 1:31 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Applejack" write/story. I would love to see an angel. I know people that have. Have a wonderful day/week writing away...........
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 10:14 PM
I was conscious of such presence once, an angel? Great being? Not certain? Awesome! Thank you, Paula. Yes, have a wonderful writing week!
Greenhough Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 8:18 AM
I relate to your poem. I remember levitating as a child when I had high fevers. It seemed to be genuine. May you enjoy the beautiful down to earth summer, and your flight of dreams.
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 10:18 PM
Yes, when I was little I often had high fevers from tonsils -- doctor gave me so much penicillin, it was the new miracle at the time, that the stuff became like water to my system...and no longer worked.
Maverick Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 12:51 PM
Dreams and reality Joe Dimino...Both seem different.? Yet we know them in the same world At the same time.' That must dissapear that eternity may take us..To just exactly where???
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 5:02 AM
Like you say, Joe, I know nothing. Finding out, the more I thought I knew, the more I learn, the less I am certain of when it comes to reality. Sure of God's Love though! That I am certain of!
Maverick Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:35 AM
I finish this retorically just btw..As we know what our Lord provides... And yet to a Big degree we don't know as Paul states the eye has not Seen the ear has not heard.' The mind cannot concieve'
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Oh that ending was fantastic. Back down to earth in the old easy chair. Great job
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea; just some harmless fantasy. Doing community service, I've met many such old men in my life...so, it was an easy relate.
Lane Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 10:58 AM
A dreamer in the night, flying among celestial lights... He's not rocker bound when he sleeps. Perhaps visualizing more than most who have sight. Tripping the light fantastic with this one, Joe. ;-)
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 5:09 AM
Hi lin; indeed, the mind is a mysterious journey. Attitude means a lot when it comes to happiness. Thank you, my friend. Have a great writing week!
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