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and in my dream- I find myself in a lush forest dripping wet with life, steamy and sultry I am one with nature and with the aqua drifting water Oh, the soft moss and the wet lime ferns I float in tranquility and beneath me water reeds grow, swaying so many hues of greens and colors dwelling in harmony juniper, sage, olive, blue, pine . . . emerald green of a little frog and dark brown of a crocodile small yellow little fish kiss my toes- a lovely fushia flower an orange snake slithers, a fluttering purple butterfly a blue birds sings sweetly- green twining vines meandering in the dark foliage, my sage eyes whisper come fall into the lush depths with me, I will take you to a world full of utter peace where all beautiful shades of nature mingle and entwine. ____________________ Contest 231 Second Place

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Date: 11/27/2016 2:27:00 AM
Hi Constance, nicely done here. It put me inside your beautiful forest. I could èven hear the sounds
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Date: 11/2/2016 9:18:00 AM
Sorry not to be original, but I agree with Janis; This is just beautiful imagery! Congratulations and this is sensational...
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Date: 11/1/2016 11:54:00 AM
I enjoyed listening to this read aloud. It is lush with the colors of life. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/1/2016 10:28:00 AM
Congrats on your win Broken Wings
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Date: 11/1/2016 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance. many congrats on your win. Lainey
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Date: 10/31/2016 4:36:00 AM
This was very beautiful. It took me to a place that was quite and serene, thank you.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/31/2016 9:27:00 AM
Tatiana thank you for visiting my poem with the beautiful ~
Date: 10/30/2016 5:43:00 PM
This is truly beautiful
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2016 5:46:00 PM
Mike thanks so much for the beautiful ~
Date: 10/30/2016 3:18:00 PM
This one is really neat. Nicely written!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2016 5:26:00 PM
Heidi, thanks so much for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

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