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An Empty Shore

For now, I know you've quietly gone Leaving my emotions in sad silence In lonely consent and a grayer dawn My loneliness asks of me compliance I spend each breath walking an empty shore Tracing faded steps we made by the sea Left to the din of life I hear no more The dark has come and its pain I must flee The clouded horizon seems closer now And tides are rising to wash away time With their churning ripples that slow somehow To pull back when my pain begins its climb The lost glow from our last evening's sun Leaves me alone as the night has begun 12/22/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/21/2018 4:04:00 PM
Lovely, Frederic. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 1/18/2018 6:04:00 PM
A sunset is so beautiful shining over the water. I can stare at a sunset for hours. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/18/2018 6:35:00 AM
Deeply emotional and beautifully written Frederic.
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Date: 1/12/2018 2:53:00 PM
Great write Frederic, congratulations my friend...
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Date: 1/12/2018 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic! Elaine
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:35:00 AM
beautiful sonnet dear Frederic, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/11/2018 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic, with this lovely, sad, sonnet.
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Date: 1/10/2018 8:13:00 PM
I remember well this sad and stirring sonnet, Frederic. A beautiful write. Congratulations for your great win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/10/2018 4:32:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking Frederic! I would have this up at the top in a tie for First place! It brought tears to my eyes. Love may fade but it never dies. Congratulations! This beauty is going into my Faves! : )
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Date: 1/10/2018 3:56:00 PM
A beautiful, as always, Sonnet, Frederic. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Sandra
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Date: 1/10/2018 2:43:00 PM
A wondrous sonnet Frederic, I sort of knew by the style this was you, a terrific sonnet, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 12/28/2017 12:39:00 PM
This is utterly gorgeous, Frederick. One to make the reader sigh!
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Date: 12/23/2017 10:54:00 AM
This is heartbreaking and your words go so well with that music... another great sonnet from your pen..
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Date: 12/22/2017 9:14:00 PM
Frederic, a sad and stirring sonnet depicted eloquently and elegantly with melancholy imagery of lost love. Warmest holiday wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/22/2017 5:13:00 PM
Very well written Frederic. :)
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