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Alluring Notes

Love notes in luring attract giggles whilst sighs loom closer. The bedroom mirror reveals, when read, she went red.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations James, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Date: 2/6/2011 5:51:00 AM

Ha! Ha! Thanks for the day brighter. Congratulations on your contest win. Wishing you many more successes in your writing journey. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem. Karen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/6/2011 5:49:00 AM

Congrats on this excellent write and warming write...Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2011 10:15:00 AM

This paints quite the picture, james! Imaginative. Congratulations.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2011 5:27:00 PM

lAnd will never tell I bet. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 5:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win James. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 3:33:00 PM

Hi James - Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

Date: 2/4/2011 1:41:00 PM

Congrats James on your well deserved win in this contest of Francine!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/4/2011 11:02:00 AM

Hello James, Congratulations on your win, amazing I use to use the same method on my standing mirror in the Grand Suite. Love it James As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 10:46:00 AM

James, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 8:16:00 AM

Congrats James on your wonderful win in the RED contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy another great prize for your poetry portfolio ...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/4/2011 6:55:00 AM

Good hot write.Many congratulations for this success.

John Freeman

Date: 2/4/2011 6:31:00 AM

Jame good to see you in the top 8. The bedroom mirror reveals, when read, she went red. A great line here, Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2011 1:41:00 AM

totally alluring, james... congrats for bagging the award!! :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:35:00 PM

I go red when I read some of your poetry too, congrats on your 7th place win in my contest James , thank you for your support

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2011 4:19:00 PM

Good one, James..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 3:22:00 PM

Quite a delightful romantic image, James. Wishing you success in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/1/2011 2:45:00 PM

Funny and so nicely written, James. I may have to try this form. I'm afraid I have become addicted to limericks. This is a creative form and you used it well. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/1/2011 2:07:00 PM

Beautiful Dodoitsu with wit and humor, James

Robert Shreve

Date: 2/1/2011 1:56:00 PM

nice write