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A Year of Fun

This year is about to close, with snow on it's way. It is time to turn the blushing apples into, a warm apple pie with ice cream. Cinnamon from the oven makes me happy, as I twirl around the kitchen floor. You make me laugh, at what you say. My cheeks feel warm, are they turning rosy? As time goes by, I feel the warmth of the sun. A fan gives me a cool breeze, I daydream away. Words I need to find, today they are off to play.

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Valsa George

Date: 10/14/2023 10:32:00 PM

"Words I need to find, today they are off to play"..... ! Enjoyed the poem especially the concluding lines. You have given permission for the words to go and play as you know that they will come back when you need them. Lovely, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/15/2023 9:16:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found this write to be lovely. Yes, words are not always there. They go out to play and make us wait. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/11/2023 11:38:00 AM

Paula, hearty congratulations on your well deserved win with this lovely and well crafted poem. Blessings and hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/13/2023 2:31:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you found this write to be lovely/well crafted. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/11/2023 9:42:00 AM

"1 Place" ~ A Year Of Fun~Date Written:10/1/2023

Karen Jones

Date: 10/10/2023 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations on a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/11/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Silent One

Date: 10/9/2023 1:14:00 PM

You wrote a lovely poem and one that many will be able to relate too.. Its has a tender touch to it.. Thank you for writing and congratulations on your placement..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/11/2023 9:49:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write and found it to be lovely with a tender touch. That makes me happy. I enjoyed writing this for your fun contest. Thank You for the placement. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/3/2023 6:43:00 PM

Enjoyed this seasoniqued reportage with us about the glories of the seasonal delights awaiting us at our door steps. Ciao. Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2023 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like this write. I love the cooler day/nights. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

David Fisher

Date: 10/1/2023 4:36:00 PM

Ah, a little play and work. A good combo in a poem, that makes me want to eat!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2023 10:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, play/work is a combo. Now let's eat. I took 3 weeks off of the computer. I needed a rest. I am writing again. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/1/2023 2:09:00 PM

We soon farewell to this year, and a grand one 'twas. I wish for you many twirls and laughter, Paula, what a nice farewell it is. B0l in the contest, good to have you back. Anaya

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/4/2023 10:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your BOL. Good to see you and glad you enjoyed my fun write. This year will be gone before we know it. Yes, twirling and laughing the rest of the year away. I took 3 weeks off of the computer. I needed a rest. I am writing again. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/1/2023 8:40:00 AM

Sounds like a lot of fun Paula, twirling around the kitchen floor, and warm apple pie with ice cream, who could ask for anything more. Enjoy your day baking away… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you and glad you enjoyed my fun write. Yes, twirling around the kitchen floor with warm apple pie/ice cream. What could be more fun. I took 3 weeks off of the computer. I needed a rest. I am writing again. Have a blessed day/week writing away............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/1/2023 8:29:00 AM

A Year Of Fun~Date Written:10/1/2023