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A Winter Dodoitsu

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Soft pearls swirl in twilight's sky Lying down, we face heaven; signaling our joy and thanks, we make snow angels for Line Gauthier's 'Bite Size Poem no.9' Poetry Contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/2/2021 9:27:00 AM

Making snow angels is just one of the joys of winter. Well said Andrea! Congratulations.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/2/2021 8:22:00 AM

Such a beautiful Dodoitsu. Congratulations!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/28/2017 8:48:00 PM

Oh Andrea, I adore the first line of this lovely and place winning poem! A gorgeous write, congratulations on your win!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/25/2017 7:27:00 PM

Lovely! Congrats on your win.

Mockingbird Stevenson

Date: 12/1/2015 7:49:00 PM

I love this! I have attempted my first Dodoitsu for the contest. I am not sure if I have understood how to correctly write one. I would love your wisdom and expertise to assist and guide me. you are by far one of my favourite poets one here. H

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 11/28/2015 11:31:00 AM

Endearing poem :)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/21/2015 3:34:00 PM

this is just lovely - one that will strike a cord with everyone

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2015 9:30:00 AM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/17/2015 6:10:00 AM

lovely dodoitsu here, andrea, nice internal rhyme in that first line - congrats on your win! :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/15/2015 7:06:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Andrea

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/15/2015 11:08:00 AM

This is a great visual presentation through poetry. Congratulations!!!

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/15/2015 11:05:00 AM

This is a great visual presentation through poetry. Congratulations!!!

Heather Ober

Date: 11/14/2015 11:50:00 AM

I should have known this one was yours! I love the idea of thanking heaven by making snow angels with nature's snow. A stunning dodoitsu. Congrats on your win in my contest :)

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 7:47:00 AM

Andrea, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/14/2015 5:45:00 AM

Andie, thanks much for the prior comment.. I'm glad just in the nick of time, I have corrected it.. =`) BIG CONGRATULATIONS on the win!~Olive Eloisa =`)