A Wait Infinite

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September-12-2025

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Night stirred memories, once forgotten,
           of the days I burnt in love
    when you consumed my days and I carried you like a queen,	
                   in the palanquin of my thoughts.

      Without forethought, to elbow out 
     the marauding of thorny memories,
  I set out, travelling miles, my heart throbbing in my chest,
            my nimble legs shaking and trembling 
       and finally reaching your hermitage.

  Casting away my stilted pride, expectant and anxious,
            I waited at your doorstep to seize the moment
  to renew a commitment and knocked hopefully at your door,
                     so far never opened before anyone.

     While listening intent for the approaching foot steps
   and the sound of the key turning on the latch,
         did I see a face peering through the window,
                              and quickly withdraw?
      Was it the face I longed to see?
          Might not be or else, I would have been admitted in!

   Time skipped quickly by, hours flitted
       between limping dawns and staggering nights

       Initially I knew the tedium of waiting
     and the crushing weight of Time on me. 
         Soon I lost count of it…. 

     Like an alien, how long had I waited there?
          Was it weeks, months or years?

   The wait must have been pretty long.
    I knew roots had grown under my feet
       and my body had vegetated into a tree,
            but without leaves and fruits!

           In Time’s eternal motion, the tree will remain there
    as a trunk of fossilized hope, till your love charges life into it!

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Date: 9/13/2025 11:04:00 PM
Dear Valsa, how sweet your poems sound. Imagery and emotions take front stage. Blessings
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Date: 9/13/2025 4:59:00 PM
' the tree will remain there, till your love charges life into it! ' Beautiful moments take time. Those that are tender and somewhat fragile. Dearest Valsa, your thoughts are soft, emotional and delicate. Holding so much wisdom within. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you, always. Hugs and blessings, Brandy
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Date: 9/13/2025 2:40:00 PM
Much like the tree of life, that yields forbidden fruits; the limbs of love can also be fickle, cruel, or dismissive. Love doesn't bud on trees, it starts as a seed in your heart. If nourished, will flourish the passion fruit you desire.
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Date: 9/13/2025 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful Poem Of The Day dear lovely Valsa! Have a wonderful day ~ Best wishes AA
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Date: 9/13/2025 10:54:00 AM
A beautiful write, Valsa. Hope eternal… Congratulations on POTD. Love it…
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Date: 9/13/2025 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed this fascinating poem. Therein I find a teaching moment
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Date: 9/13/2025 10:19:00 AM
A heartfelt and moving poem, my dear friend. As you stood with so much trust and optimism, I was hoping to be there for you. At that time, it is going to pass. Wow, Valsa, your poem is just fantastic. Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 9/13/2025 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful/wonderful "A Wait Infinite" write. Have a blessed day with your win as you go writing away..........
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Date: 9/13/2025 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, Salva! We see only what we want to see it seems. Beautiful words poetess. xXhugs __Anaya
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Date: 9/13/2025 8:39:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Valsa. A lovesong of waiting. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/13/2025 8:00:00 AM
A powerful and intimate poem, my dear friend. I would feel to need to be of your heart as you waited with such hope and faith. In its moment, it will be. Congratulations on your poem being our POTD, Valsa! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Smiles ~ Blessings, your old friend and poet in Texas. Hugs, Bill p.s. a FAV for my list.
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Date: 9/13/2025 6:09:00 AM
Wonderful and awesome writing, Valsa. Great ending! Congratulations on POTD! Have a nice weekend!
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Date: 9/13/2025 5:38:00 AM
Fantastic write, Valsa! The wait is long & hopeful, the longing relentless! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/13/2025 5:17:00 AM
Valsa, beautifully written. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 9/13/2025 4:39:00 AM
exquisite writing, Valsa...a poem worthy of POTD designation.
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Date: 9/13/2025 3:15:00 AM
Congrats, dear Valsa. A poem to be admired.
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Date: 9/13/2025 3:57:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor. Wish you a joyous weekend.
Date: 9/13/2025 12:53:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Valsa well deserving of today's POTD honour. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 9/13/2025 3:56:00 AM
Hi Tom, you never fail to inform me of my POTD. Thanks a lot dear friend. Hope you are back home after all your travels. Have a great Sunday.
Date: 9/12/2025 5:22:00 PM
your poem is filled with the subtly that exists between hope and waiting. This is an exquisite poem, a masterpiece on so many levels. Well done, Valsa, hugs, Sara
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Valsa George
Date: 9/13/2025 3:54:00 AM
Dear Sara, thank you so much, my ever encouraging friend. Sending you love and best wishes. Enjoy your week end.
Date: 9/12/2025 2:45:00 PM
" I knew roots had grown under my feet and my body had vegetated into a tree, but without leaves and fruits!" -- Wonderful writing! Without love, a poet just exists, absent the life that lights his heart and spawns his pen. Great writing.
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Date: 9/13/2025 3:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Joe for your kind comment. Have a great day!
Date: 9/12/2025 7:45:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Your poem is absolutely breathtaking and it’s so full of longing, devotion, and that exquisite tension between hope and waiting. I love how you turn emotion into motion, carrying me alongside you through each step, each heartbeat, each moment of anticipation. Blessings, Valsa, Daniel
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Valsa George
Date: 9/13/2025 3:48:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Daniel. This approval from a poet of your stature is so much appreciated. Thanks a lot, dear friend. These two days are so much hectic for me as we have a house function. I shall come to your poem after two days. Have a great week end and stay blessed.
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