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A thousand dreams are left to still be dreamt, To angel arms my sweet and loved were sent; So far from here- and I just write and weep. I write this glorious sorrow I keep. I hold my pain within, twisted and bent, A thousand dreams are left to still be dreamt; I am trembling, so sad is this journey. Tell me dear Lord, will you give me mercy? Will these sad dreams just go on for always? Dear Lord will you open other doorways? A thousand dreams are left to still be dreamt, And oh, this sadness- is this what you meant? Just open up the door and my soul will soar, Then it will sing and float above, and roar. My destiny has been to grieve what came and went. A thousand dreams are left to still be dreamt. ___________________________ January 25, 2016 Poetry/Quatern/Rhymed/A Thousand Dreams Copyright Protected, ID 16-748-902-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Quatern Rhymed, Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich Third Place

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Date: 2/7/2016 6:27:00 PM
It's a delight to keep myself motivated
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:17:00 AM
So sad and so beautiful, as always, BW. Congratulations on your nice win in Andrea's contest. Hugs, Sandr
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:11:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful and the hugs !
Date: 2/7/2016 10:12:00 AM
Again, your heart is an open book, tears and emotions always bring us to your side. Well done, Broken Wings !! Congrats to you!
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:11:00 PM
Carrie, thanks for the nice comment and the congrats, appreciate so much !
Date: 2/7/2016 6:09:00 AM
You always find the most beautiful and appropriate images to go along with your writes, and this poem and image are the perfect examples. Congrats!
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:12:00 PM
Lin, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats ~
Date: 2/7/2016 4:17:00 AM
BROKEN, Congrats in Andrea's contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:13:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 2/6/2016 7:16:00 PM
A beautiful flawless Quatern, dear Constance . Many congrats on your win. Elaine.
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:38:00 PM
Elaine, thanks you for the congrats and the beautiful and flawless, appreciate.
Date: 2/6/2016 7:01:00 PM
Very sad, Constance, but hopeful! Well done. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:40:00 PM
Roy, thank you for visiting and for the congratulations and compliment, oh if I could only let go of the past ~
Date: 2/6/2016 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations in my contest, Constance. Your meter and rhyme now are nearly perfect. The theme was a sad one but moving and beautifully written.
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:41:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the great contest, and for my fine placement, as you know I got the book on meter and have been practising, so this makes me so happy and honored ~
Date: 1/28/2016 11:52:00 PM
Broken Wing, this is so emotional and beautiful. Another beautiful articulating piece of art a 7.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:44:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the visit, the beautiful and the compliment, so grateful for the 7 too!
Date: 1/25/2016 2:55:00 PM
Beautiful and oh so moving it brought a lump to my throat - good luck in the contest Broken Wings:-) :-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2016 2:58:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the beautiful, yes it is sad, but you know me, sad is my forte... thanks for the hugs too ~
Date: 1/25/2016 2:21:00 PM
Oh girl so sad and so lovely! Well written.
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Date: 1/25/2016 2:43:00 PM
Thomas, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the lovely and well written, appreciate !
Date: 1/25/2016 11:32:00 AM
- Just wish to give you only delicious and sweet dreams, B.W. - A moving and beautiful poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2016 11:36:00 AM
Anne Lise, thank you so much for the nice comment and the beautiful and hugs !

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