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Upon your grave, I placed a single scarlet rose. And said goodbye to you, it's my fault; heaven knows. You begged, please let me stay, yet I ignored your plea. And pushing you away, my anger watched you flee. Raindrops pummeled your face while the wind whipped your hair. And as you crossed the road, fate chose to be unfair. A speeding car hit you; now your ghost haunts my dreams. And torments me nightly, fueling nightmare screams. I'm so sorry you died, you deserved so much more. But it's time I let go and let your spirit soar. (Quatrain) 5/15/2015

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Date: 3/1/2018 6:07:00 PM
A lovely read. So well narrated, Emile.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your visits are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 5/26/2015 1:11:00 PM
Such a sad but touching story Emile. Brought tears to my eyes. I love this read and write. A perfect picture to add to the tone. What a wonderful write to me......Sharon G.
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Date: 5/27/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Sharon, I appreciate your warm words and friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 5/20/2015 2:55:00 PM
WOW! You touched my heart with the soft, sad petals of this amazing scarlet rose! Brilliant piece, my friend, that deserves a solid "7!" Pandita
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Date: 5/20/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Pandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 3:49:00 AM
Very touching . Beautifully written.Thanks for visiting my poem.
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 2:32:00 PM
This poem was well written. You drawn the reader in with every word. Its so full of emotion I'm on the brink of tears.-Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, I greatly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/15/2015 4:37:00 PM
Excellent write.......your fiction poem looks like real, full of imagery,emotion and sad touched.
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/15/2015 3:29:00 PM
Emile, your write is so sadly beautiful, very emotional, 7 and what a lovely picture and thanks for visiting my poem, For Rent
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/15/2015 11:16:00 AM
This poem depicts the pain and devastation of a lost love, haunting. Difficult tio say goodbye. Superb write. 7
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Date: 5/15/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thanks as always Nandita. Emile.
Date: 5/15/2015 10:28:00 AM
A vivid wonderful write with depth and meaning .....thank you ...
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Date: 5/15/2015 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Judy, I appreciate your visit and warm words of support. Emile.

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