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Lord, why do I search in vain? I yearn for peace as fish for water, As flowers for fresh air, Yet my life lies in tatters. Where are you hiding, Lord? What kind of peace can I find? Mine or yours? Thus do I search. Need I climb treacherous mountains? Or meander down the verdant vales? Trek narrow paths or saunter wide roads? Utter prayers or flirt with temptations? Suffer anguish or relish in relief? Until it dawned on me that You can only be found Deep down in my heart, Surrounded by all my good and bad. And all I want is experience the feeling That you love me as your child. My heart urges me to shout, My joy will echo among mountain tops, Or reverberate in deep lush vales, Oh let me follow you in new ways of life, That I might love you for the good of the world. That You accept me and forgive me, In Our Father's name, Amen.

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Date: 3/22/2022 3:05:00 AM
Amen. This is most touching and filled with emotion and feeling. Its beautiful and wonderfully said. May your words be heard and I'm certain they are. Have a peaceful and beautiful day Victor. Blessings and Love now and always. (smile)
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Date: 3/21/2022 3:59:00 AM
Unconditional love...Delice
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Date: 3/20/2022 6:53:00 PM
A prayer from the heart. Our journey with God is never over even when times are quiet. Beautiful,Victor.
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Date: 3/20/2022 7:08:00 AM
A beautiful prayer... Very moving...
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Date: 3/20/2022 6:01:00 AM
Victor, Your words are insightful and accurate. Your willingness is genuine, and your prayers are sensitive and straightforward. This is an absolutely lovely bit of writing. We appreciate your sharing them.
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Date: 3/20/2022 5:58:00 AM
A beautiful prayer from a sincere heart, Victor, He is never far away from His praying children:)
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Date: 3/19/2022 5:40:00 PM
Dear Victor , Your words are deep and sincere . Your longing real , your prayers vulnerable and speaking to the heart . Beautiful write . I send you blessings. Susan :)
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Date: 3/19/2022 8:43:00 AM
Earnest prayers like this are always answered, Victor. God bless
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Date: 3/18/2022 10:44:00 PM
A heartfelt prayer ! Sometimes we feel very miserable ! During such times we become unable to pray even . But when we are calm, we can raise our hearts to God and ask for grace to accept whatever troubles come our way ! Definitely God will hear our prayer and make us His darlings ! Peace and love to you Victor!
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Date: 3/18/2022 5:30:00 PM
Victor, this was a sincere prayer from the heart. God always hears the prayers of those that are His. Prayers and hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 3/18/2022 2:30:00 PM
A wonderful prayer, Victor. It's nice to know that the Lord hears every word. Hugs, Evelyn
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Date: 3/18/2022 1:50:00 PM
A beautiful prayer where you are honest and wanting! God honors such prayers, my friend!
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Date: 3/18/2022 11:03:00 AM
Sometimes we wonder if he has heard us or if we had prayed hard enough. But I'm sure he has. Tom
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Date: 3/18/2022 8:52:00 AM
- A beautiful prayer with deep feelings, my friend Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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